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The Dance of Life


 

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THE DANCE OF LIFE
THE DANCE OF LIFE

Debbie E. Payne

 

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LIGHT FROM ABOVE
LIGHT FROM ABOVE

Debbie E. Payne

 
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IN PROFILE

Debbie E. Payne

 
 
 

Debbie E. Payne
 

I was just having fun with a bouquet of flowers the other day that a friend brought over for me. Used the tripod and my flash unit to get these shots.


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December 09, 2012

 

Dale Hardin
  Very nice macro work Debbie. Did you use TTL flash or manual settings? I assume the flash was off camera as well.


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December 09, 2012

 

Debbie E. Payne
  Thank you, Dale. I had my flash o ETTL with a series of negative settings so they wouldn't look like deer in the headlight. I had nice soft window light on my dining room and for the most part I used small apertures to maximize the DOF. Sadly, for the most part I had it on camera with a white cap over it.


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December 09, 2012

 

Jeff E Jensen
  These are excellent, Debbie! Very nice work.


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December 10, 2012

 

Elaine Hessler
  These are beautiful. My favorite is the first-I love the detail of the pollen grains-everything that should be in focus is sharp. I also like the backlit petals-they appear to glow. Would you mind sharing the f stop and lens/focal length you used? I need to practice more macro shots!


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December 10, 2012

 

Debbie E. Payne
  Thank, Elaine. The first one , of these three, was the longest time at 1 second, middle one was 0.4 sec. At f/13 and the last one was the shortest at 1/10 of a second with f/8. All had an ISO of 100 and flash field on all three as well. I have been trying to get used to my flash unit which I've had for a long time.


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December 10, 2012

 

Peter W. Marks
  The first one is my favorite Debbie, but couldn't say exactly why.


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December 11, 2012

 
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  these are great debbie you really did a nice job working with the flash. I should try it also. I am terrible when comes to using a flash. I usually avoid it if at all possible.

I really don't have a favorite I like them all for different reasons. the clarity is very very nice.

I hope all is going well since your surgery.


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December 11, 2012

 

Teresa H. Hunt
  These are great Debbie. I really love the first one. You captured the detail so well.


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December 11, 2012

 

Stephen Shoff
  It can be a lot of fun just playing to see what you can get. Great job on these. I like all the texture in backgrounds and would hate to lose any of it. But on your original post, it seems just a little too centered. While I'd like to the see the image shifted to the right so that the stamen were close to the left ROT line I don't think adding more of the really bright background would help...unless maybe you use a gradient to reduce hilites. Otherwise may be an 4:5 crop with more taken off the right than the left?


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December 11, 2012

 
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