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Canon 7d, Canon 100mm 2.8, IS macro Lens,f/3.5, 1/250, ISO 400, Edited in LR 4, and Viveza

Beth Spencer

 
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Canon 7d, Canon 100mm 2.8, IS macro Lens, f/3.5, 1/250, ISO 400, worked in LR 4, viveza and then filters applied in Color Effex Pro 4

Beth Spencer

 
 
 

Beth Spencer
 

I also edited this with color Effex Pro 4 and applied a couple filters, here is the other one.
This is one of the Black Eyed Susans that has not opened yet in my flower garden


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August 13, 2013

 

Kristin Duff
  love the first image Beth...never met a shade of green I didn't like...the second image looks a little too 'worked' for my taste...


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August 13, 2013

 

Jeff E Jensen
  This is really nice, Beth! I also prefer the first version., though I'm not sure I'm in love with the crop. It feels like it needs to move to the left a bit.


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August 13, 2013

 

Stephen Shoff
  To me, Beth, a picture like this is about contours and texture, and maybe a suggestion of "opening". While the greens are wonderful, I'm not sure they contribute much to the message of the image. How well do you think this image communicates as a B&W?

Since I think texture is important in this, and it looks to me like your ColorEfex edit increased "structure", it may be that your edit is a slightly stronger image.


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August 14, 2013

 

Peter W. Marks
  I too prefer the first image Beth. But am not quite understanding Jeffs comment.


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August 15, 2013

 
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  Beth what a cool find. I really like all the green. Out of the two as is I like your original because of the softness it has. as for your edit I like that you brought out the textures more but you made a halo around it which isn't good. I would start over an make sure you select the flower only on a separate layer,


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August 15, 2013

 

Elaine Hessler
  Hi Beth-sorry I am late to this one! I think I prefer the first one too. Question-were the petals this green? Is it possible to put a little more yellow into the petals and take a little yellow out of the background to separate it better? I do love the texture on the first and the leaves around the flower are really pretty.


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August 16, 2013

 

Kalena Randall
  It's a full house! The first one! I really like the depth of the details of the flower to the bokeh in the background.


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August 17, 2013

 

Beth Spencer
 
 

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Canon 7d, Canon 100mm 2.8, IS macro Lens,f/3.5, 1/250, ISO 400, Edited in LR 4, and Viveza

Beth Spencer

 
 
Sorry it has taken so long to get back to this. I got the color edits done and plan on doing a black and white tomorrow.
I tried to get the flower a bit more yellow. Elaine, they were almost this green when they started but as they got bigger they got yellow. I think I added space where Jeff was talking about.


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August 17, 2013

 
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