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Green and Red


 
  Green and Red
Green and Red

1/60 Sec - f/6.3 - ISO 640 - 67mm
Canon 5D Mk III - Canon 24-105mm f/4.0L IS - 12mm Extension Tube

Jeff E Jensen

 
 
 

Debbie E. Payne
 

Rarely am I ever first, Jeff. I like the colors and great texture. Nice diagonal lines, too. Can't think of anything to change. I an trying to get to all the new ones before we leave again on Sunday for Yellowstone and Grand Tetons!


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August 07, 2013

 

Susan Williams
  These anomalies are hard to pass up. Nice composition on this one. I think I would try to pull out some detail in the leaves and play the green off the color of the bricks a little more. Love the sloppy mortar joints - it just wouldn't be the same with veneer. Cool shot, Jeff.


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August 07, 2013

 

Jeff E Jensen
 
 
  Green and Red - Reworked
Green and Red - Reworked

Jeff E Jensen

 
 
Alright, here's a re-work. I actually started from scratch as I had originally worked on this one from my laptop while out of town.


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August 08, 2013

 
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