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Green and Red

© Jeff E Jensen

Green and Red

Uploaded: August 06, 2013

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1/60 Sec - f/6.3 - ISO 640 - 67mm
Canon 5D Mk III - Canon 24-105mm f/4.0L IS - 12mm Extension Tube


Exif: F Number: 6.3, Exposure Bias Value: 0.67, ExposureTime: 1/60 seconds, Flash: did not fire, compulsory flash mode, ISO: 640, White balance: Auto white balance, FocalLength: 67.00 mm, Model: Canon EOS 5D Mark III

Comments

Debbie E. Payne August 07, 2013

Rarely am I ever first, Jeff. I like the colors and great texture. Nice diagonal lines, too. Can't think of anything to change. I an trying to get to all the new ones before we leave again on Sunday for Yellowstone and Grand Tetons! #1539504

Susan Williams August 07, 2013

These anomalies are hard to pass up. Nice composition on this one. I think I would try to pull out some detail in the leaves and play the green off the color of the bricks a little more. Love the sloppy mortar joints - it just wouldn't be the same with veneer. Cool shot, Jeff. #10800189

Jeff E Jensen August 08, 2013

Alright, here's a re-work. I actually started from scratch as I had originally worked on this one from my laptop while out of town. #10800371

Peter W. Marks August 08, 2013

Nicely minimalist image Jeff but I do follow what Susan pointed out. #10800375

Elaine Hessler August 08, 2013

Yep I remember this! Here's one from a different point of view.

BTW, I do like the rework. #10801162

Susan Williams August 08, 2013

Wow, thanks for posting that image to put Jeff's in context, Elaine. I had imagined he found a little straggler vine. It's like the vine was singing to Jeff: "Come a little bit closer, you're my kind of man."

Jeff - I like the added detail but you're so conservative on the green. I would jack it up a little more to bring out the colors of the bricks. #10801303

Jeff E Jensen August 08, 2013

I love it, Elaine! Looks like that thing is after me.

Susan, I'll mess with it a bit more. #10801354

lisa anderson August 08, 2013

I'm always drawn to this kind of shot, Jeff. Did you try it cropping any off the top or bottom? I think I'd like it better as a more panoramic.
(The shot of Jeff taking the picture is great, Elaine. Thanks for the context) #10801383

Beth Spencer August 09, 2013

I like your edit Jeff! Elaine thanks for posting the bigger picture. Sometimes it is easy to miss the little things in the bigger picture! #10802445

Rita K. Connell level-classic August 10, 2013

I like the rework Jeff looks better. and agree with Susan another little tweak

Elaine love that image. it give a great perspective. I love how it does look like the vine is coming for him. #10803032

Stephen Shoff August 11, 2013

I like the rework on the greenery but not brighter reds. The brickwork lost detail and depth. I read Susan's original suggestion as increasing color contrast by brightening and strengthening the greens more than the reds. #10804232

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