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Use tricks of imagination


 
  Remove distraction
Remove distraction

Roxie Guilhamet

 
 
 
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I like the red rosette. It fills in the right side with your theme without overpowering your main attractions: the flowers continuing on into the background. Good trick. My imagination is intrigued.

The composition would be stronger, however, without the bright patch of wall on the right. My eye goes to the contrast, but you want it to follow the glowing flowers back into the distance. Move in closer to cut out that distracting patch. This also places the front flower on the lower third sweet spot.


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May 29, 2013

 
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