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Brandi K. Mills

 
 
 

Brandi K. Mills
 

This is my attempt at an action shot...
I had just finished some still shots with this girl and forgot to change the aperature.
Got it at f/1.8, 1/640 sec., ISO 125
with my 85mm


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January 06, 2013

 
- Bonnie C. Lackey

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  Lots of energy! Nice job!


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January 06, 2013

 

Teresa H. Hunt
  Great action shot Brandi :)

I can't tell if the face is soft or if my eyes are to tired. I was also thinking you might want to trim a bit off the top to give the illusion of jumping higher . . . but I'm not sure if that'd work. :)


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January 06, 2013

 

Dale Hardin
  I've done that same thing many times Brandi. Glad you mentioned it because that explains the softness and DOF.

But in this case the action and expression are so good, that the problem becomes secondary and not a deal killer. It's a beautiful image of a very vivacious girl that is a keeper all the way.

Thanks for getting this month's challenge rolling. By the way, I think Teresa's suggestion has some merit and is worth tying to see if you like it. If you do, don't loose more than 1/2 the area above her head.


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January 06, 2013

 

Dale Hardin
  Forgot to mention that you can improve that softness a great deal by applying a high pass filter, set at about 1.5 and an overlay blend.


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January 06, 2013

 

Brandi K. Mills
  I hope I don't sound too dumb, but Dale I'm not sure what you're talking about with the high pass filter and overlay blend. Again, it may be something I can't do in lightroom...
Thank you for all the input btw =)


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January 07, 2013

 

Beth Spencer
  Congratulations on the EP! If you are using LR you can sharpen it there. If you increase the detail and then if you hold down your alt key while sliding the masking it will sharpen the edges and everything you see turning black is not sharpened and masked. I hope that makes sense it not let me know.


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January 07, 2013

 

Jeff E Jensen
  Yup, the issues aren't an issue, great shot!

Nope, high pass and overlay can't be done in Lightroom.


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January 07, 2013

 

Debbie E. Payne
  I think, Dale has hit the nail on the head with this one. A tad soft but the stop action certainly makes up for that. Very well done image, Brandi.


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January 07, 2013

 
- Rita K. Connell

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  this is awesome shot Brandi, looks like she was having fun. perfect for the month challenge. Don't you just hate it when you forget to change your settings. Its usually my ISO congrat's on the EP


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January 08, 2013

 

Kristin Duff
  Congrats on the EP Brandi! Way to go..


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January 09, 2013

 

Debbra Bailey
  Great shot and congrats on the EP!


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January 09, 2013

 

lisa anderson
  Very energetic and happy! Congrats on your EP :)


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January 10, 2013

 

Brandi K. Mills
  Thank you all! This one was a lot of fun!


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January 10, 2013

 

Anthony L. Mancuso
  Great concept and execution Brandi, I think Dale's suggestions and a slightly tighter crop would both be improvements..


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January 12, 2013

 

Peter W. Marks
  That's a fun shot Brandi, I started smiling as soon as I saw it. Nice work.


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January 15, 2013

 
simplydivinephotography.com - Susan M. Reynolds

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  Congratulations on your EP and a great shot! I really like this one...and yes, it does make one smile :)


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January 26, 2013

 
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