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I've always been drawn to stairs in photography, and this set grabbed my eye, with a lot of line and texture.
Yet at the end of the day, it remains a (fairly simple) poured concrete stairway, built around a broad curving wall.

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- Michael Kelly

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Chris I love the textures and the march of the stairs up that elegant curve. The POV that puts the stairs and the wall into a yin and yang relationship works great. I love it both as an entry and as a great photo.


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November 28, 2012

 

lisa anderson
  Wow! Nice shot!


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November 28, 2012

 

Debbie E. Payne
  Makes me want to walk up and see what is at the top. Is this on DC? The curve really leads the way into the photograph.


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November 28, 2012

 

Jeff E Jensen
  Excellent, Chris. And, a perfect entry for the challenge.


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November 28, 2012

 

Aimee C. Eisaman
  Love the composition and the fact that not only are there great lines in this, but a curve in just the right spot. :~) The blue tint is great as well. Nice job on the challenge!


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November 29, 2012

 
- Rita K. Connell

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  I am with every one else on this one....WOW love the feel of this one....I'm with debbie what is at the top of thoses stairs! love all the texture on the wall!


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November 29, 2012

 

Dale Hardin
  Welcome to the challenge Chris and such a great entry too. The composition is superb and the texture and color very appealing.

Since this is a critique club, I have only one very small caveat. Unless you planned it that way, the image has a very soft dull look to it. Perhaps a bit of high pass filtering to add a little definition would be an enhancement.


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November 29, 2012

 
chrisbudny.com - Chris Budny

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  Thank you all!

Yes, it is in DC (campus of A.U.---their fairly new Arts building & gallery space; quite modern in design, very handsome!)

Dale, I did do some "darkroom" edits to this that definitely lend a softer feel, along with the tint away from pure b/w.

Also---is there anything further I need to do, re: KISS Challenge?


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November 29, 2012

 

Stephen Shoff
  I like the picture a lot, and the treatment except that I'm with Dale...the only downside to it for me is the softness of the steps. But since you indicate that that is intentional, this is a matter of taste.


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November 29, 2012

 

Dale Hardin
  Thanks for the input on your post processing Chris. Figured that the softness was due to choice. And yes, you handled the challenge just fine. New one in a few days though. :O)


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November 29, 2012

 
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  Hmm... I'll have to go back to the original and see about a new edit, without the softer touch, and see how that feels... Thanks!


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November 30, 2012

 

Peter W. Marks
  This works really well Chris. Would you share with us which of the many color-to-mono conversions you used?


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November 30, 2012

 
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  I'd be happy to, if I could only remember!! I edited this some time ago. I'm pretty positive I would have used Nik Silver Efex for the BW, then added in the faint tint in Color Efex or else PS...
I've never figured a good way to "store" all my edits in PS (say, in a multi-layered image) that would allow me to determine later, just what'd I'd done!


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November 30, 2012

 
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  Chris I don't use add in software like Color Efex so I don't know about that but if you save your PS file as a PSD it will save all the layers and edits with it. It can be pretty big, but storage is cheap these days. I store all my edits this way and always print from the PSD file.


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November 30, 2012

 
chrisbudny.com - Chris Budny

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  That would work---but I think I need to figure out the Smart Objects component---so that my layers (which originate in Color Efex, for example) can get me back into Color Efex WITH the settings I used---that would be the best. And yes, that will certainly add to file size!


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November 30, 2012

 

Dale Hardin
  In situations where I use outside filter settings, I label the Photoshop layer with those parameters. For instance I may call a layer "Topaz clarify 50% softlight blend"


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November 30, 2012

 
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  That's a good start too... But in some of those NIK filter tools, there can be 20-30 settings to achieve 1 effect layer!


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November 30, 2012

 

Dale Hardin
  Bummer!


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November 30, 2012

 

Beth Spencer
  I think this one works great for the challenge. I love the curve and the textures.


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November 30, 2012

 

Renee Doyle
  Perfect title and such a strong and wonderful graphic design Chris!!! Love it!


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November 30, 2012

 

Stephen Shoff
  In Silver Efex Pro, I create a custom preset after I've completed the edits and before I return the image to Photoshop. I name the preset with the image number, which is also a component of my .PSD file name. This is analogous to the ACR .xmp file. I think this may get unwieldy over time, but it is working for now.


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December 01, 2012

 
chrisbudny.com - Chris Budny

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  Thanks, Renee & Beth!
Stephen, I've created a few custom presets after I get a result I like---but I didn't think to name them for the image; interesting idea! Yes, it could quickly get out of hand, I suppose---you'd have to decide how minor/major a change, departing from 1 saved recipe, would warrant saving the new settings as a new recipe!
I think the Smart Objects is the way for me to go---I've just resisted learning about them/using them. But if I understand it, once that Smart Object layer is made (containing the NIK adjustment effect), I can click back on that layer anytime later, and be ported back into NIK with the exact settings that were originally used in NIK. I think...!


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December 01, 2012

 

Teresa H. Hunt
  Great entry for the challenge. I love the simplicity and the elegance of the curving staircase. :)


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December 01, 2012

 

Stephen Shoff
  Chris, no, you won't be ported back with the same settings. You will be ported back with the image as it stands and default NIK settings. You might do better to return to NIK with the image you started with (presumably stamped version of preceding color processing), and then try to apply the NIK changes from the notes in the Smart Object layer (can you put notes in a smart object layer, as opposed to the name field on an adjustment layer?

None of that will help you apply localized edits using control points. That will require an awful lot of note taking.


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December 03, 2012

 
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  well, shoot! I could live without PS remembering my control points probably... but it would be nice if it ported you back with the filter's global settings intact... sigh.


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December 03, 2012

 
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  Alas, I see tonight, this image was skipped for EP... :(


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December 03, 2012

 

Stephen Shoff
  yes, it would...or if they had a way to concatenate the search path so it looked for a NIK setting file in the same path as the picture coming in. Then you could manage it just like he XMP files.


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December 03, 2012

 

Elaine Hessler
  Congrats on the EP! Sorry for the late post. I like it the way it is. The texture and simplicity really work for me. Very nice.


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December 03, 2012

 
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  Thanks, Elaine---and what a surprise it made EP after I thought it was skipped (since 12/1 and 12/2 had EP's already.)


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December 04, 2012

 
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  Late to the game here and just getting back online on my computer from my phone...so sorry about the non-participation.
Congrats on your EP. Love the composition and leading lines. I'm in agreement with Dale on the soft look to it. I also think it would look great with a Sepia finish.


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January 26, 2013

 
chrisbudny.com - Chris Budny

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  Welcome back! And thanks for the input---I may go work up a sepia treatment now...!


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January 27, 2013

 
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