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- Michael Kelly Contact Michael Kelly Michael Kelly's Gallery |
I like it Rita. Nice clear portrait shot. Good tones and the BG, though light, works well giving the shot a backlit feel. I also like the ofset of your subject in the frame which makes the shot less formal and adds interest and a bit of diagonal comp even in this very tight shot.
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Elaine Hessler |
This is really pretty Rita. I like it too. Although for some reason, my eye is drawn to the background, not sure why. The lighting on her face is very nice and I agree, I like the composition too.
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Jeff E Jensen |
I agree that the background is a bit distracting, perhaps if you cleaned out the green so it was just white?
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Peter W. Marks |
And there we go Rita; I waited just long enough for someone else to complain about the green. Now I can just say "Pretty lady, nice expression and agree with Mike".
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Dale Hardin |
I like the pose and nicely balanced tones Rita. The major distraction is the background and it's a tough one to fix. First I would suggest removing the color cast and adding a bit of high pass to the eyes. Just a tad. I love back lighting but this isn't quite working though you could tone it down a lot by using the change color tool and reducing it's intensity. The hard part is removing the distracting background without messing with the hair. Another option is a tight 4x6 vertical crop so that her left eye is at the upper right ROT cross point and the crop not extending past her hair.
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- Rita K. Connell Contact Rita K. Connell Rita K. Connell's Gallery |
ok I clean-up the background, sharpen her eyes alittle. but sorry dale I just didn't like the crop.
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