Abridgment
Uploaded: May 22, 2009
What I did here was cropped the image tightly (using only part of the building) and darkened the black areas and used levels to brighten the whole image. I also used saturation up to +20 for the brick colour change.
I wanted to have a caption that really worked with this image so I found a word that I never used before: Abridgment.
A noun meaning, that which has been shortened; an abstract.
Elements Of Design - May/09
(F 8 @ 1/150 sec., 200 ISO, Pattern Mode, Focal Length 35 mm)
Exif: F Number: 8, Exposure Bias Value: 0.00, ExposureTime: 1/150 seconds, Flash: fired, auto mode, red-eye reduction mode, ISO: 200, FocalLength: 35.00 mm, Model: PENTAX *ist D
Teresa H. Hunt May 22, 2009
A very interesting photo. I like it. The color is nice, and it caught my eye when I open the club page. #1131509Annette Carr May 23, 2009
I love the lines, and the contrast colors. Abridgement - great word :) #7549551Christine Lobsinger May 23, 2009
Hi Teresa, glad you like this image... thank you for saying so.Smiling Chris
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Christine Lobsinger May 23, 2009
Hi Annette, thank you for your nice comments too...Smiling Chris #7550137
Marisol Pastor May 26, 2009
Fantastic EOD Christine! Love the crop and the red on black. #7559188Christine Lobsinger May 26, 2009
Hi Marisol... Thank you very much my friend!Lori Carlson June 02, 2009
Well done, Christine!!!! This is an awesome image!! =) #7591278Christine Lobsinger June 02, 2009
THankS VERY MUCH Lori...Jim Kinnunen August 16, 2010
You've got a great eye for lines and design, Christine!:) #8841832Christine Lobsinger August 17, 2010
THANKYOU VERY MUCH FOR YOUR KIND WORDS JIM... I WISH THAT CONTEST AT 'OUR CANADA' MAGAZINE HAD A CATEGORY FOR ELEMENTS OF DESIGN...SMILING CHRIS #8843320
Richard D. Love September 08, 2010
Congratulations, Christine. Wonderful use of lines, colors, and texture. Well done.Rick #8889391
Christine Lobsinger September 08, 2010
THANKS RICK,Dennis Gay December 02, 2010
Ahoy *CHRISTINE*!Firstly my heartiest Aussie congratz for this fine architectural abstract being awarded an EP.
It really stood out to me as I cruised your gallery and on closer inspection I was delighted to find not only a good composition but a lot of exquisite detail.
The parallel diagonal lines set the image, the converging and diverging lines give the image its abstraction and the wonderful 'tinkling' brick detail brings it all to life.
The colours and toning then add their warmth.
Be proud!
GB
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Christine Lobsinger December 02, 2010
Hi Dennis, I so appreciate your words, and I am HONOURED! Thank you very much!Carla Capra Anderson February 04, 2011
Hi Christine;Bruce E. Van-Buskirk July 28, 2011
I love your gallery. Again I am a sucker for great lines and flow in a picture.The contrast in this picture adds great visual tension. I am surprised in only got an editors pick.
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Christine Lobsinger July 28, 2011
I really appreciate your kind words.. thanks so much for looking throu my images...Sign up for an interactive online photography course to get critiques on your photos.
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