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Uploaded: June 03, 2006

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Exif: FNumber: 5, ExposureBiasValue: 0/3, ExposureTime: 1.66666666666667E-02, Flash: flash did not fire, ISO: 100, WhiteBalance: auto white balance

Comments

Brendan Knell June 05, 2006

This is realy cool Beth! The lines in the building are really cool. Also the contrast between the the wood and the greenery is good. #459071

Robyn Gwilt June 08, 2006

Now this is really nice Beth. I love the lines and the perspective and the texture on the wood is lovely :) Keep shooting! #2870307

Christopher P. Golden January 31, 2007

Gorgeous shot. Love the way the boards lead the eye. #3897766

anonymous A. February 02, 2007

I rather like this, Beth. There are sections of the boards that are overexposed and should be burnt in a bit, and to mt eye it looks like it should be straightened up (use the edge of the window as the vertical line).
My only other concern is that, having led our eyes into the scene, there is nothing there to look at. I think that the real picture is in the detail of the wall and window. I don't know if cropping out the background is the way to go, but I would at least try a severe crop from the right. #3903367

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