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A Forever Family

© Margie Hurwich

A Forever Family

Uploaded: January 03, 2006

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Corinne M. Thompson January 03, 2006

Hi Margie, I like this version better than the original, it's more spacious. I also like the yellowing you added to it, adds a bit of "aging". Don't like the dark stripe at the top...my eyes keep going to it instead of the shoes. Hope this helps. :) #368689

Gary Lange January 03, 2006

Cool family shoe shot, tells a story! #2249312

Margie Hurwich January 03, 2006

Thanks Corinen and Gary. I'm so torn of which I like better. All tells a story though! #2249372

Susan L. Vasquez January 04, 2006

It's so CLOSE! the crop on the top has already been suggested, I'd crop the wall and the first two lines created by the molding. The color is nice but maybe a bit too yellow.
I do like being able to see all of the shoes, it is a very creative and cool shot. #2251553

Margie Hurwich January 04, 2006

Thanks Susa, but I've tried everything I can with this and still seem to like my original best. #2251614

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