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Electrical High [Bicycle Pictures and Bicycling Photographs]

© Melissa L. Zavadil

Electrical High

Uploaded: July 07, 2005 05:08:46

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This photo was taken for a possible ad for an electrical company. So, I would REALLY appreciate if you all would let the critisism rip on this shot! THANKS!! :o) By the way there were two computer changes that were done to the photo. 1. the boy was put higher in the frame. 2. Two of the electical lights were turned around in the photo.

Let me know of anything your eye might see as needing to be changed. Thanks Melissa

Comments

Sandy Landon level-classic July 07, 2005 0

Great action shot!!!! Good job!! #274758

Tammy Scott July 07, 2005 0

WOW! Awesome cation capture, Melissa! #1564257

Donna K. Kilcher level-classic July 07, 2005 0

It is a great action shot #1564485

Bobbie Davis July 07, 2005 0

Ummmm.....I don't see a thing that needs to be changed on this image Melissa! It's tack sharp, great timing, and great colors. Maybe lighten it just a touch? #1564548

Melissa L. Zavadil July 07, 2005 0

Thank you for your responces! I appreciate them all!

Bobbie, I see your point. I was very focused on making the lights the key feature that I might have darkened the image a bit too much. I will see what I can do. THANKS!! :o) #1565238

Kerby Pfrangle July 07, 2005 0

Melissa

Great action shot with wonderful lighting.

No critisism here.

Wonderful shot.

Kerby #1565258

Joy Rector July 07, 2005 0

Wow, what a great capture. Great job. #1565384

Deb Holmes-Hatfield July 07, 2005 0

Awesome action shot, Melissa, great comp, looks really cool! #1565473

KHAWLA Haddad July 07, 2005 0

Great action shot Melissa this is fantastic love it well don! #1566852

Goshka G. July 07, 2005 0

Looks great to me, Melissa!! Wonderful job!! #1566883

Alisha L. Ekstrom July 07, 2005 0

Oh WOW WOW WOW Melissa...This is a TERRIFIC action shot. Love the colors & everything about it...You go girl!!!:) #1566935

Ermanno Radice July 07, 2005 0

Wonderful action shot, great capture, Melissa! #1567480

Terry R. Hatfield July 08, 2005 0

Excellent Editing Melissa!The People Are A Distraction In The Background I Would Clone Them Out,A Bit More Light On The Rider Since Its A Electric Company Ad Might Help Out, Its Very Creative Overall I Like It:-) #1568066

Olivia Navarro July 08, 2005 0

WOW, Melissa, fantastic shot!!! I, too, find the other people a bit distracting but I think they could be easily cloned out with the darkness of the trees behind them.

So how'd you get that gig? :-) #1568106

Linda D. Lester level-classic July 08, 2005 0

Awesome placement between the lights! I do think maybe a touch lighter on the bike and clone out people at the bottom! Awesome shot, I think they will be very happy with this. #1569417

Detrick V. Martin July 09, 2005 0

Great image, well done! #1572589

Tammy Scott August 20, 2005 0

Congratulations on another awesome finalist! #1740426

Anita Taylor August 20, 2005 0

This is fantastic, Melissa! Congrats on making finalist! #1741271

KHAWLA Haddad August 20, 2005 0

Congratulations on your finalist! #1741454

Kerby Pfrangle August 21, 2005 0

Melissa congratulations on your wonderful finalist. Best of luck in the next round.

Kerby #1742824

Ken Grooms August 21, 2005 0

I hope you get the nod from the client! You deserve it! Well done and congratulations! #1743395

Patricia Marroquin August 21, 2005 0

Awesome capture, Melissa! Well done, congrats! #1744210

Detrick V. Martin August 21, 2005 0

Congratulations! #1745309

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