And That's a Wrap!
Uploaded: May 13, 2005
aperture f/3.1, shutter 1/8 sec, lens 61mm,
sunset Jan, 1, 2004
somewhere along the CA AZ border between Hwy 10 & 40
Hey, what can I do with this photo?
You can take me there and drop me off.
But that's up in the desert mountains!
Good!
How about we wait until winter?
Mmmm Maybe ...
Pam M May 13, 2005
Wedged a layer of sandstone between two layers of originals and called it done.This is one of those driving (no, riding) down the road with the camera in auto-mode moments.
This sunset lasted 4 hours! And this is about 40 min before it's last bit.
There's more but gotta run ...
have fun
pam #248770
Pam M May 14, 2005
Here's the originalHere's what I want to know ... Is the white toooo white? and anything else ...?
Have fun,
Pam #1351385
Pam M May 14, 2005
Opps forgot to sign in first. #1351416Matthew Gordon May 14, 2005
Hey pam in response to your question. I think it is a little too white. It could stand to be darkend just a little. #1351830Stan Kwasniowski May 14, 2005
Hipam, its hard comparing the two images, I like the rectangular one better more room for the photo, the square one, to me is like being in a tight box, well thats at least my opine, but heck I have been wrong before, Once lolStan Kwasniowski #1352741
Protacio Serna May 14, 2005
the cropped version is better.nice motion, great curves, excelent colours, woderful sky.
I like it
Regards
PSerna.com #1352761
Pam M May 15, 2005
LOLThanks Matt and Stan.
I keep confusing everyone with the second pic. Mmmm I'm going to have to find a way to clearly say: Here's the original just so you'll know where I started from.
WHAT? Protacio? You really don't have anything for me to fix? I'm marking this day down on my calendar: One photo made it past Protacio ;)
Thanks bunches for the imput
Have fun,
pam
#1354723
Protacio Serna May 15, 2005
yep...I like it.:) #1355624
Miles Mitchell May 16, 2005
I like it Pam. Great progression from shadow to highlight. Just the right amount of mystery to evoke inquiring thought and comment. Horizontal crop really works well here.Miles #1357832
Sharon L. Wack May 16, 2005
Hello Pam Great Job! I love the top one the long one makes the eye tour it and its softer feeling JOB WELL DONE!Pam M May 18, 2005
Thanks Ya'llI enetered it in the elements of design catagory of the contest just for grins.
Have fun,
Pam #1365780
Kate Jackson May 22, 2005
I like it too. Great improvement on the original. I would definitely have ditched the original without paying it a second thought. Just seems like a great abstract that reminds me of sunset mountain drives. #1379852Sign up for an interactive online photography course to get critiques on your photos.
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