Left Alone

Uploaded: October 24, 2008

Description


F3.5, 1/250 sec, ISO 400. At Arches National park, this monolith of sorts, stands by many different formations, quite unique from the others. The clouds were enhanced using Topaz adjust.

Exif: F Number: 8, Exposure Bias Value: 0.00, ExposureTime: 1/125 seconds, Flash: did not fire, compulsory flash mode, ISO: 100, White balance: Manual white balance, FocalLength: 28.00 mm, Model: Canon EOS 40D

Comments

Bunny Snow October 24, 2008

This would be an amazing capture if the subject were not centered. What a beautiful stormy sky! Good tonality and color.

The composition needs improvement and I think that if the large monolithe were off to the right, it would keep the viewer's eye in the frame of the image.
But, of course, I wasn't there, unlike you. #1022457

Karamatullah Danyal October 24, 2008

Thanks Susan,
I have one exactly like the one you mentioned. I have been dismissing it because I thought this one was a nicer image. But, now I will submit it. Thanks for your kind critique.

Danyal #6653434


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