Rose

Marcos Medina (M2PhotoArt) 11/20/2006 11:45:08 AM

I really like the lighting but the lip ring is a little distracting. It takes away from the main focus. #560075

Jeff Robinson 11/20/2006 12:15:51 PM

Nice work Karen! We all see things a little different and I thought that the ring added an extra element of character! Jeff #3608951

Karen Beri 11/20/2006 3:15:26 PM

Hi Marcos and Jeff,
Thank you both for your comments, I'm still not sure if I like the lip ring, but it was part of the model. I do appreciate the feedback! Thanks again,
Karen #3609501

Michael S. Swaffar 11/20/2006 6:24:54 PM

Hello Karen

I love it.. Awesome compositon and incredible lighting. I'd even like to see it in BW or even a little SC of the Rose.. It's very dramatic.
Your whole gallery is GREAT! #3610040

Reggie Santos 11/21/2006 7:44:52 AM

great image..i like the composition and the lighting is superb, rembrandt

hope to see this again!

reggie #3612014

Karen Beri 11/21/2006 8:59:19 AM

Hi Michael and Reggie,
Thanks so much for your awesome feedback!
Karen #3612362

Steve M. Harrington 11/25/2006 11:29:30 AM

Hi Karen, I like the composition, but the model looks a bit muscular. Perhaps it was your intention to juxtapose the lip ring and muscularity with the rose. I think it would be interesting to see the image with the light on the arm toned down. I think that would soften the feel of the image.
Steve #3629748

Karen Beri 11/25/2006 3:31:41 PM

Hi Steve,
This girl is actually not very muscular at all, I think it was just the position of her arm. I am going to submit another similar image converted to B&W as per Michael S. suggestion which I think will look better. I will also clone out the lip ring, as I think it kind of contradicts the femininity I was looking to capture:)
Karen #3630307

Ken Jarvis 11/27/2006 4:34:15 PM

Great composition Karen! I like your use of lighting. Nice job. #3639854

Michael Khoury 11/28/2006 11:08:35 AM

~~~this picture is not simply about the subjective elements in the composition, but about the ethereal harmony created between light and dark which allows us to inexpecably feel good~~~
~~~Bravo Karen !~~~
M #3643302

Michael Khoury 11/28/2006 4:02:23 PM

sorry... that's, 'inexplicably' :)...
m #3643998

Karen Beri 11/29/2006 5:43:19 AM

Hi Ken and Michael,
Thank you for your thoughtful comments, I really appreciate it :)
Karen #3645828

Karen Beri 11/29/2006 5:43:31 AM

Hi Ken and Michael,
Thank you for your thoughtful comments, I really appreciate it :)
Karen #3645830

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f8, 1/125, 100mm lens, strobe lighting

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