Karen
Uploaded: January 15, 2013
A candid shot of my niece. Image shot in dimly-lit Cellar Bar, Mevagissey, Cornwall.
1/60sec; f4.5; ISO 400, 75mm fl
On-camera flash activated beyond its normal maximum effective range.
Exif: F Number: 4.5, Exposure Bias Value: 0.00, ExposureTime: 1/60 seconds, Flash: fired, compulsory flash mode, ISO: 400, White balance: Auto white balance, FocalLength: 73.00 mm, Model: Canon EOS 50D
Stephen Shoff January 15, 2013
I think pushing the flash beyond its range limits probably helped this picture. It looks to me like you got good lighting without noticeable flash shadows. #1509114Jeff E Jensen January 15, 2013
Yeah, this is really nice, Peter! #10516845Dale Hardin January 15, 2013
In total agreement with the guys, Peter. Had you been closer it probably would not have been as good. Really looks good. #10517250Rita K. Connell January 16, 2013
lighting is great but I alittle confused with beyond its normal maximum effective range. to me that says why did you use it? please explain! #10517748Debbra Bailey January 16, 2013
The lighting does look good, but I am as confused as Rita about what you meant by "activated beyond its normal effective range..."Also, the top of the head looks odd to me... did you work on the background or something? The top left of her head (from our perspective) and her sunglasses seem to sharply cut out in places. Does that make sense? #10518430
Beth Spencer January 16, 2013
The light does look good, but I too am totally confused about the normal maximum effect thing?Teresa H. Hunt January 16, 2013
The lighting looks great . . . especially since you used a flash. :)I think the end of her nose looks a little funny. Almost like you applied a gaussian blur for the background and forgot to erase it off her nose. #10518996
Rita K. Connell January 16, 2013
now I have taken a closer look I see what debbra and teresa is saying about the blur especially on the nose #10519103Debbra Bailey January 17, 2013
Yup. I saw the nose thing too, but forgot to mention it before! #10519652Peter W. Marks January 17, 2013
Thank you gentlemen; I appreciate your kind comments.Peter W. Marks January 17, 2013
The pre-cropped image.Rita K. Connell January 17, 2013
thank you for the information in my mind I thought that is what you meant but there was just a little question if I was right or not....Dale Hardin January 17, 2013
If you really want to know how to get rid of those shiny spots on a nose, let me know Peter. Always glad to help out an old friend, and God knows, you need help. :o) (calm down, you know I'm kidding) #10519937Peter W. Marks January 17, 2013
Of course I do Dale. Then I will go out and see if I can find someone else with a shiny nose.Hey Rita, Life is fun, ain't it kid? We just learn not-to-sweat-the-small-stuff; never to look into the kitchen of a fastfood joint; truly believe that red wine will make you live longer and lettuce and other green stuff will probably kill you because they warn you on the bag to wash them throughly and then you forget to sanitize you hands.
Now I am going to have a beer as that's good too. Cheers! #10519958
Debbie E. Payne January 18, 2013
I'm not sure how I missed getting my two cents in -- thought I wrote something on it earlier this week but I guess it "went away"! Anyhow, what I said was I liked it and considering the original I haven't seen yet, I like the original even better. You did "right" to crop in so close. And about the light - I about half-way understood but then, I am just now venturing out with any kind of lighting. Not exactly a "student of light" just yet.#10521843
Peter W. Marks January 18, 2013
Thanks for the tutorial Dale. It might be a while before I get around to trying it but I do follow what you suggest and like what you did with Karens image; a real improvement.Jeff E Jensen January 18, 2013
That's a great tip, Peter. Also works well for some Photoshop plastic surgery. #10522329Peter W. Marks January 19, 2013
Oops! I forgot the final step. It should be Filter>Distort>Liquify now select the brush size AND click on "Warp" which is the topmost square on the left side of the screen and it is a tiny drawing of a index finger pushing into flesh (I guess). Now do the drag thing I mentioned aboveDebbra Bailey January 21, 2013
Just catching up on this post. DIdn't mean to sound too critical Peter! Sorry about that.If you do ever want to edit a lot in the background, I usually duplicate the image in layers. Then I work on the background and can softly erase it off of my person wherever it looks weird. #10526089
Peter W. Marks January 21, 2013
No problemo Debbra! The top of her hair and glasses are a mess. I did use layers but have forgotten what sort of masking or selection I used. I sometimes feel I should buy a tablet so that I could use a stylus to make my selections as I can't get any precision with the mouse and I am too impatient to make more than a couple of quick attempts. Perhaps I should take up a different hobby! #10526206Debbra Bailey January 21, 2013
You are too funny Peter! #10526696Peter W. Marks January 21, 2013
OK, I finally got around to trying Dale's very detailed tutorial that he mailed to me.#10526751
Peter W. Marks January 21, 2013
And I couldn't ever get that right.Dale Hardin January 21, 2013
Perfect! I knew that tutorial was just what you needed. :o) #10527021Beth Spencer January 22, 2013
I am starting to see a family resemblance! #10527996Peter W. Marks January 22, 2013
And I thought I was the comedian in this club! #10528046Rita K. Connell January 22, 2013
thank you for a great laugh with my hot choc this morning and feels like -8 degrees. You are a comedian alright #10528056Susan M. Reynolds January 26, 2013
The last one was too funny for words :)Peter W. Marks January 26, 2013
Thank you friends; having a laugh will make the cold, cold days pass more quickly. And in addition Susan good to see you back in force this weekend. U.P. #10539052Elaine Hessler January 27, 2013
Sorry I've been out of it-school started and I missed all of the excitement! And entertainment :)You better not show your niece the goofy shot, she will NOT be happy!
She sure is a pretty gal though Peter. #10540307
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