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small town girl #2

© Brandon e. Wall

small town girl #2

Uploaded: July 15, 2005

Description

same as smalltown girl.
she has a bit of a grinn on this one

Comments

December 11, 2005

I like the pose, her expression is great and adds to the image nicely. the distraction is the bars on the right side the photo. this would have also made a very nice full body (including the feet) shot. Sorry, but I am a stickler for getting the feet in the shot if they need to be there. this image does not nessessarily need the feet the way you shot it but try the same pose with the same background (without the bars) and shoot it full body and see what you think. You might also try shooting her expression as a tight close up of the face to capture the eyes. #357826

Brandon e. Wall December 11, 2005

great point
ty bw
#2175162

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