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BetterPhoto.com Photo Contest Finalist   Both waiting
Both waiting
A rather strange image.

Peter W. Marks

 
 
 

Lisa G. Putman
 

I love it! That blue window really draws you in. The title is great. I didn't even notice the bird at first. Nice irony!


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September 24, 2007

 

Peter W. Marks
  Thank you Lisa! This image is a recrop of a much broader viewpoint across the harbor in Polperro, Cornwall, UK. At first I didn't notice the seagull but when I did, I saw in my mind an interesting juxtaposition of the elderly woman with an expression of resignation as she perhaps approaches the closing years of her life whilst the very young seagull which has not yet grown the pure white feathers of an adult bird stands puzzled as it wonders where the ocean went as the tide receded.
I deliberately cropped this so that it ignored "rule of thirds" which sometimes is persued to the absurd, whilst creativity is ignored. The black versus the bright, sunlit white, creates a tension which as you perceptively point out Lisa creates an irony. Dark-light, age-youth.
Thank you again.

Pete


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September 25, 2007

 

Joan Kocak
  the first thing I thought of was the american painter McNeill's "whistler's mother"!!!! very intriguing to read your thoughts, and the image is a haunting one~


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September 25, 2007

 

Peter W. Marks
  You are so kind Joan; thank you! I know the painting to which you refer and I guess there is a similarity with that detached look on the old lady's face. I find myself wanting to sit and talk with her next time we are back in Cornwall.
Looking through the galleries on BP I find myself increasingly attracted to images of people where their expressions or actions demand some input from me, even if only in thought.

Regards,

Pete


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September 25, 2007

 

Kathleen Brennan
  Evocative and emotional, Peter. It brings up longing and loss for me.


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October 01, 2007

 

Peter W. Marks
  Thank you so much Kathleen. I am still trying to find where I want to be with my photography. When I return to my native Cornwall each year, nostalgia is 90 percent of choice of image. They really don't have to mean too much to other folk. When I shoot a harbor with boats and fishing nets I am recapturing, sights, sounds and smells of my childhood, my youth and adult vacations. But when I manage to capture something like the old lady in the "Waiting" image or my "Girl on a Train" I am attempting to take it up a couple of notches to where someone looking at them can interpret them in their own way and apply their own emotions.
Thank you again Kathleen.


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October 01, 2007

 

Joan Kocak
  CONGRATS Pete, beautiful work!


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October 25, 2007

 

Megan p
  Congratulations Peter, I really do enjoy this image! Wonderful color too!


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October 25, 2007

 

Peter W. Marks
  Thank you Joan and Megan. I did kind of hope this image would have some recognition although I am not to deep into trying to win contests.(if I were, I would enter dozens of imasges of flowers lol) I enter them on BP contests because that is where other members seem to browse and I would like to get the occasional feed back.
This image of the old lady is not something one could plan ahead so it is just plain luck when the opportunity presents itself.
Have a great day friends,


Pete


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October 25, 2007

 
- Gail Vitikacs

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  Congratulations on an amazing finalist!


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October 25, 2007

 

Peter W. Marks
  Thank you very much Gail and a warm hello!

Regards,
Peter


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October 25, 2007

 

Pat Gamwell
  WTG, Peter! BIG CONGRATS on this fabulous finalist!


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October 30, 2007

 

Peter W. Marks
  Thank you Pat! And may I say how delighted I am that your image of the young lady with Downes Syndrome has received such a huge amount of compassionate and admiring responses from so many BP members. Bravo!

Pete


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October 30, 2007

 

Amber Kennedy
  VERY strange ...BUT very intriguing image....I LIKE it!


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December 30, 2007

 

Peter W. Marks
  Thank you so very much Amber.
I have just retired from work this past Friday so I am hoping that I can devote more time to photography. When I look at other folks' galleries on BP I realise that I have a long way to go with the quality of my images. I have a good sense of composition and cover a vast range of subjects but am impatient, so selecting the right settings on my Canon 20D tends to be somewhat rushed. My horizons invariably lean to the right which I insist to my wife is caused by my right leg being shorter than my left. It isn't really but since I herniated a disc a couple of years back I do tend to stand with my weight on that side and don't notice the tilt until someone remarks on it!
So my New Years resolution is "try harder" and read the manual!

Regards, Pete


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December 30, 2007

 

Penelope Pereira
  Hi Pete

This is remarkable, I think when your eye is drawn to a pic and it holds your attention, then you have created a masterpiece. This pic keeps your eye fascinated to it.

Penny


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February 29, 2008

 

Peter W. Marks
  Thanks for dropping by Penny and your very kind comments. We are returning to Cornwall for a vacation this summer and no doubt will visit Polperro again but I kinda doubt the old lady will be sitting in the window again! The seagull certainly will not still be waiting for me!
With a whole month back there I am hoping that I can do some much more "intentional" photography rather than quickly grabbed shots-Cornwall, my birthplace has so much variety of scenery and ancient history that I could fill a dozen hrad-drives with images without repetition.
Regards, Peter


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March 01, 2008

 

Penelope Pereira
  Peter

Have a blast in Cornwall, I am sure you will return with some wonderful pics. Looking forward to seeing them on your site.

Penny


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March 02, 2008

 

Peter W. Marks
  Thanks Penny! I shall buy a cheapie tripod while over there and leave it with my family for future trips. None of my images are very sharp so I need to do that as an antidote to old-age shakes!


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March 02, 2008

 
- Jeffrey D. Estacio

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  This is priceless Peter. Nice catch.


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May 14, 2008

 

Peter W. Marks
  Thank you so very much Jeffrey for dropping by and your most kind comments.
Now I am off to take a look at your gallery!
Pete


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May 15, 2008

 

Jeff Millard
  Oh this is really great... love this one! (Oh..and I threw in another 'leg' pic for you on my gallery: Biker Chicks and Butterfly). Jeff


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September 28, 2008

 

Peter W. Marks
  Thanks Jeff! Now I am off to your gallery to see the Biker Chicks. Cheers, Pete


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September 28, 2008

 
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