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Larva


 
BetterPhoto.com Photo Contest Finalist   Larva
Larva
f: 5
S: 400
iso: 200

200 mm

Mohammed Abbas al ali

 
 
 

David F. Dornberg
 

Mohammed,
I do like your color, clarity, shallow DOF of the background and the framing of your larva. I would like to see just a bit more space to the right, so that the larva has a bit more room to reach into. Sometimes when there is not enough space to reach into, they viewer's eye wants to follow it's reach right out of the photo.

Nice shot!

Dave


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October 28, 2006

 
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  Mohammed, excellent colors, detail, lighting and textures.


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October 28, 2006

 

Hayden Cannon
  fantastic capture Mohammed great colors and details on this great image


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October 28, 2006

 

Septa Iskandar
  Wonderful makro Ali...
Nice DOF, tone and composition...


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November 20, 2006

 

Jagadeesh Andrew Owens
  Absolute macro perfection! Bravo!


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November 21, 2006

 
- Kay E. Mahoney

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  Congratulations on your beautiful finalist. Good luck in the next round.


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November 23, 2006

 

Nadya Johnson
  Congratulations on your outstanding finalist, Mohammed!


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November 24, 2006

 
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  Mohammed, congratulations on your finalist.


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November 24, 2006

 

Husain Akhtar
  So sorry for the delay in congratulating you personally – I struggled to find October finalists – thanks to Trula that now I have the link! Wake up BF!!
However, big congratulations and best wishes for the next round, my dearest friend!


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November 24, 2006

 
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