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Little Duckling
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Little Duckling
Kimberly Cline |
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Steve Downen |
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use the rule of thirds
August 30, 2006
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Mike Rubin |
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Usually "The rule of thirds " makes for a much more pleasing image However I like the circular pattern in the water and I don't think it would be as nice if you followed the rule. I do think that a lower POV would be good, but not low to the point that the pattern of the water would be lost.
August 30, 2006
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Rhonda Burger |
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I agree Mike. The full ripple shows the vulnerability of the little duck. With the duck centered also emphasizes how small it is. I like it.
August 31, 2006
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Tarun Bose |
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Congrats Kimberly for finalist.
September 26, 2006
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She-She Killough |
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I agree with Mike and Rhonda..and you also would want to keep the reflection of the duck in front of him. Kimberly you did a great job Keep up the good work. AND CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!
September 26, 2006
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Steve Downen |
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I do like the elements of the ripples in the water as they produce the effect of showing the vulnerability of the duckling by framing it with a bullseye. However, I think you might consider cropping the picture so the duck is at the top left corner. Congratulations on the finalist, and congrats on a fine piece of art. I only critique the ones I like.' PS- don't dwell on the angle of the photograph, it is something you cannot change; dwell on what can be done at the present. -Steve Downen
September 27, 2006
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