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f3.5, 1/125s, September 3, 2005 @ 11:03AM

Fort Pitt Steel Casting, McKeesport, PA.

Converted to B&W in PSCS

Jason V. Hewitt

 
 
 

anonymous A.
 

This is a bit flat for me, tonaly, graphically and as a subject. Maybe it just suffers in comparison with your COGS.
I'd like to see this, Chevro, Stairs, Hook,Gears and furnaces given the full Jason treatment like those punchy, dramatic industrial abstractions like Jaw Grinding and Cogs...I'll even learn to live with the light scribbles, if necessary!


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November 21, 2005

 
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