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- Roxie Guilhamet

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There are many lines here, and the S-curve to the chair has potential, but no one line is strong enough on its own to be a good example of a leading line in this shot. The chair lines take over. A good leading line would be stronger. Try again.

It looks more like a posed shot than a comfortable scene. I also wish I could see her eyes. I know she's supposed to be reading but it looks like they're closed.


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September 07, 2012

 
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