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Strawberry


 

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Strawberry
Strawberry

Jeff E Jensen

 
 
 
- Michael Kelly

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Some nice gooey drippy detail here Jeff. I like the overall feel of the shot and the colors. It makes a nice abstract and I think as an abstract it is good as is. I am not sure where I would enter it though.


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August 23, 2009

 

Christie R. Bielss
  Not to sound like a dork - but is this a strawberry? Love the drippy, fuzzy detail here. Very interesting photo-makes you really look hard at it. Maybe this would work best in D&M.


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August 23, 2009

 

Jeff E Jensen
 
 
 
Christie - this really is a strawberry. Here's the original.


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August 23, 2009

 

Christie R. Bielss
  COOL!!! I see it now! It's on its side. Nice macro work, Jeff!


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August 23, 2009

 

Debbie E. Payne
  Jeff - I like this as an abstract. I'm not sure about it being in details and macro because it is really more about a "feel" and a "flow" and not details per se. Think I'd put it in Catch-All. Of course, I could be totally wrong,too.


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August 24, 2009

 
- Rita K. Connell

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  this is a cool shot but I actually like the original shot better, the right bottom corner is a distraction in the post one, and the leaves and the details is more comfortable for my eyes to look at in the second post. Great shot Jeff.


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August 24, 2009

 

Jodi M. Walsh
  i also favor the original. the posted version has me focusing more on the space between the leaf and berry and I end up not knowing what to look at.

when in doubt, I usually enter in Catch all. very interesting view Jeff!


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August 24, 2009

 

Teresa H. Hunt
  I think if your going to enter this you should put it in abstract. However I too like your original shot better.


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August 24, 2009

 
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