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Lil Guy...Big Shadow


 

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Lil Guy...Big Shadow
Lil Guy...Big Shadow
A tiny baby praying mantis on the hood of my husband's orange truck...I’ve never seen one so little, only about an inch long!

Susan M. Reynolds

 
 
 
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I'd like to try and enter this maybe in the macro if you guys think it's okay. Or is there anything I need to do to it. I can't really tell the quality on this laptop monitor very well at all. It looks different after loaded on the BP site.


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August 07, 2009

 
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  I meant 'original' and about the center shadow line, I meant that I tried to remove it so it wouldn't compete with the little mantis' shadow.


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August 07, 2009

 
- Rita K. Connell

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  way cool shot Susan, I really like the original shot best. My eyes likes the line from the truck because that is the way of the shadows it help lead me right out of the picture. the dirt on the truck lend to, is that food or not. the only one that gives me trouble is the one at the bend of his leg in the shadows should be clone out. Awesome shot. The edited one is way cool also.


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August 07, 2009

 

Teresa H. Hunt
  I actually like your edited shot. You can really see the little guy. Yes I think you should enter this in the contest. I think Marco would be a good category


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August 07, 2009

 

Dale Hardin
  I love this Susan. Simple graphical images are a favorite of mine and this fits the bill. By all means enter it in the macro or even elements of design.

The shadow reminds me of Kanji characters. This image would look good with some kanji written on it poster style.

Definitely prefer the corrected image.


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August 07, 2009

 

Anthony L. Mancuso
  love this image Susan and I agree with Dales thoughts...the only thing I would consider doing is increasing the contrast or maybe adding a opacity adjusted multiply blend to the bug to enhance the color of him, but I love the simplicity and contrast of the green on orange..


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August 07, 2009

 

Jeff E Jensen
  Fantastic capture Susan! Like the others, I love the simplicity of this. Well done.


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August 07, 2009

 

Christie R. Bielss
  Wow Susan! I love the edited shot. Like the others have said, I love the simplicity of it. Most definitely enter it!! Great job! Love the title too!!


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August 08, 2009

 

Peter W. Marks
  Good morning Susan. Having both versions is really interesting. I very much like both of them and to me they say different things. The modified version is pure graphic design as Dale suggests and as such is very static. It could be a dead bug placed on a piece of card in the studio. The original however, suggests a bug on a mission as he follows that diagonal line and this for me can conjure up movement, a living story that makes it a more dynamic image.
Isn't it good that we all see things differently! I visit art galleries and shows about twenty five times a year and if a piece of work doesn't 'speak' to me in any way, no matter how well it is executed, then I just pass along. I guess I need to be able to verbalise what I am seeing whereas for many folk, it is color or shape that grabs their interest. Viva la differance!
Pete


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August 08, 2009

 

Debbra Bailey
  I LOVE this! That orange is amazing, and his shadow makes the comp so interesting! I defin. prefer the edited image without the line! Great shot!


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August 08, 2009

 
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  Aren't these little guys amazing. And you did a great job of capturing him/her. The shadow is fantastic and I think either one is a winner.


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August 10, 2009

 

Jodi M. Walsh
  what a fun shot! I love praying mantises (manti?) very cool. congrats on the EP!


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August 11, 2009

 
- Ellen H. Robertson

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  Yep you got a winner... congrats


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August 13, 2009

 
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  Oh I even got an EP finally! Thanks to all for your comments and hints!

I am back in but in very slow motion. The pain meds are wiping me out and I have not done any shooting since the third re-shoot of that Senior Portriait kid.
I feel loopy and out of it so if I don't make any sense when I'm commenting please forgive me!
Just concentrating on trying to get past this and feel well for a change.
I'm finally back in the mix of things but just very slowly.
Thank you Rita for the flower photo, it was beautiful and to the rest of you that sent prayers and good wishes for a speedy recovery.
You are all a very lovable and loyal group and I'm so happy to know you all and have you in my llife!
~S~
I'm getty mushy...must be the pain meds.


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August 14, 2009

 
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  Dale,
I did try a highpass filter, but couldn't figure out how to work it. That was before the ER incident. Will try again when I am feeling better.
Thanks for your help
~S~


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August 14, 2009

 

Debbie E. Payne
  I am SO glad to see an EP under this very inventive picture. Way to go, Susan!


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August 14, 2009

 

Dale Hardin
  Susan I hadn't recommended a high pass filter on this but here is how to do it.

you have to make a duplicate copy of your image on a new layer (control + J) and apply the "filter/other/high pass" filter to the copy. The image will turn grey and ugly. Increase the slider untill you can see the details you want and then use a blend mode to group it with the original image.

Overlay blend is mid strength, soft light is low strength, and hard light blend would be strongest. After the blend you can adjust the effect using the opacity slider.


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August 14, 2009

 

Christie R. Bielss
  Congrats on the EP Susan!!!


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August 14, 2009

 
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  Thanks all!
Sorry bout that Dale, I was loopy from the pain meds and it was late and I was thinking of the photo of Charlotte and writing on this one.
Do you think the HP filter would improve this photo if I were to try it?


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August 15, 2009

 

Dale Hardin
  I remember Charlotte. How did that work out?

As far as the HP on this shot, it would work OK with reservations. On the Mantas only because it would cause jagged lines on the shadows. Also if you do it you need to zoom in and be more precise on the cloning of the line you removed. Especially on the "fingers" of the his main "arms" and a few other areas.

But I don't think you really need to do it as it's a great shot as is.


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August 16, 2009

 

Aimee C. Eisaman
  Congrats on your EP....awesome idea for background color and getting that shadow in! :~)


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August 22, 2009

 

A P
  Love this Susan. Little bug big shadow. Love it, love it, love it!


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August 30, 2009

 
simplydivinephotography.com - Susan M. Reynolds

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  Thank you Ann and Aimee and Dale for your creative input :)


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August 31, 2009

 
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