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Marni M. Conway
BetterPhoto Member Since: 3/2/2005
 

Please critique my work


I'm interested in trying to sell some of my photographs. The photos on my gallery are some from about a year ago. I haven't had a chance to upload any current ones, but I would really like some input on what is already on my gallery. Thank you!


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8/17/2005 4:44:48 PM

 
Brendan Knell
BetterPhoto Member Since: 4/17/2005
  Overall I think that you are a great photographer. I commented on some of your photos individually.


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8/17/2005 6:28:57 PM

 
John Rhodes
BetterPhoto Member Since: 2/24/2005
  Marni,
For the most part, your photos are excellent. However, the few problems really distract from the potential of the photo to really stand out. I see your main problem is geting the horizon level.

--Tulips: the portion of sky at the upper right is very distracting. It shows your camea was not level to the horizon. I suggest cropping the top.
--Barn, White Church, Field of Dafodils, Hana, Maui, others: As mentioned above, getting the horizon level is so important.
--I would develop a much less noticible signature stamp (brush).
John


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8/18/2005 6:11:33 AM

 
Jon Close
BetterPhoto Member Since: 5/18/2000
  Marni - beautiful photos. Do you live in Maui? My wife and I vacationed there several years ago and your photos made me "homesick" (I wish it were my home)!

I left some comments as well. Ditto John's re the horizon.

So far as simply posting photos for critique, I don't think the bold copywrite signature is a problem, and may help inhibit theft. But you certainly wouldn't print or sell the images that way.


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8/18/2005 6:46:27 AM

 
Marni M. Conway
BetterPhoto Member Since: 3/2/2005
  Thank you all for your input. The signatures on the pictures was on by mistake. The pictures no longer have that on them. I will work on the horizon. Jon, I used to live on Maui as a child. Now, I just go for a visit. Again thank you all!


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8/18/2005 9:59:39 AM

 
Kerry L. Walker   Take me with you the next time you go! Please?


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8/18/2005 1:44:45 PM

 
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