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How to improve this shot?
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Artificial Flowers, Paris Street Market
Normally I don't like artificial flowers, but this closeup gave a nice focus on color.
Larry Manire |
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Candles in Iceland Store
Larry Manire |
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Docked Fishing Ship, Reykjavik, Iceland
I submitted a closeup of the yellow cleat and red ship but this wider shot may be richer while still showcasing the color.
Larry Manire |
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Collage on Wall of Paris Bldg
I felt there are too many colors and they are too chopped up to be a color submission but on the other hand the variety adds spice.
Larry Manire |
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Icelandic Sweater
Since this is also pattern as well as color, I left the thread hanging down in the center to provide a little echo.
Larry Manire |
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Tower @ Night
Pete38 Jones |
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Shot this one (my first night shot) with my Pentax MZ70 with standard 28-80 lense (Pentax)at 2:00am with Kodak Gold 400; F4.5 with 2 secs exposure and lite diffuser filter...how could I inprove this shot...looks too busy to me i.e. street lights over exposed?
December 02, 2002
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Adam |
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Simply in my opinion the pic looks to be in a great place. I think the diffuser is making it too blurry. I would ditch it, and then the pic would seem a tad more crisp as you know... Other wise the location is great
February 16, 2003
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Tiffany M. Barkevich |
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hi Pete
i dont think the photo needs ANY improvement. I think the blur adds to the photos unique-ness. the color and brightness of the lights agianst the black background has a intenseand cool contrast. nice job.Tiffany Barkevich
Antigodess@hotmail.com
August 13, 2003
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