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Twin Vine lleaves


 
  Twin Vine  lleaves
Twin Vine lleaves
Nikon D90 with Nikon 18-105mm
Managed with Aperture 3 PS and Nik Viveza

David Resnikoff

 
 
 

Arthur Bohlmann
 

David did you post the same image twice? I do not see any difference with this one


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July 27, 2013

 
- David Resnikoff

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  I did not, Arthur

I followed your advice, and took away the leaf on the top that distracted the whole composition, following your advice

David R


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July 27, 2013

 

Arthur Bohlmann
  I still see the green thing in the upper right


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July 27, 2013

 
- David Resnikoff

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  I erased the leaf on the middle right on the top.

I will work on it again to see what I get

david R


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July 27, 2013

 

Arthur Bohlmann
  It is a good image anyway but I look forward to your re-edit


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July 27, 2013

 

Howard Eisenberg
  Love the lighted...and the framing Was this inspired by Rita's image last week?


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July 28, 2013

 
- David Resnikoff

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  Indeed Howard.

Thanks a lot

David R


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July 28, 2013

 

Susan Williams
  I really like the backlighting and framing against the cloudy sky, David. Very appealing image.


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July 28, 2013

 
- David Resnikoff

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  Thanks Susan


I do appreciate it a lot

David R


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July 28, 2013

 
- Rita K. Connell

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  I really like this but I really find the upper right corner a distraction it totally pulls your eyes away from the awesome capture of the leaves. love the lighting and contrast with the blue sky


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July 29, 2013

 
- David Resnikoff

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  Dear Rita

I have edited the photo, HaveĀ“nt pot it

Soon

David R


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July 29, 2013

 
- Rita K. Connell

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  David I believe that everyone is talking about taking the whole green leaf out that is in the upper right corner as well as long the side they really don't add to the image composition your leaf's in the middle can stand alone.


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July 29, 2013

 
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