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Uploaded: January 01, 2005
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Protacio Serna January 01, 2005
Hope you like it...and if you don't please let me know.Regards
Protacio Serna
www.perna.com #201039
Bob Fehringer January 01, 2005
Reminds me a bit of Cartier-Bresson, except the moment is not yet there. The birds almost blend into the background. Perhaps a bit more contrast might help.Good luck, and keep shooting.
BF
www.sportsshooter.com/aavspj #1008248
Piotr M. Organa January 01, 2005
Oh, man... Of course I like it!
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Linda Proctor January 01, 2005
I like this one No details on why I just like it Linda #1008445Arya Bandyopadhyay January 02, 2005
Protacio, you've got a great image. Simply great. #1008581Patricia A. Kuniega January 02, 2005
Excellent image Protacio! You always go for complex compositions which this one certainly is! The composition is very strong and keeps the eye moving. The backdrop is loaded with fascinating visual detail, and the birds in flight are varied and superb! : ) #1008885Protacio Serna January 02, 2005
Thank you all.Agree with you Bob. I liked the shot but the felling that something is not in the right place still remains.
I’m still interested in better print and sure I’ll try a bit more contrast, but it is the dove in the upper part of the frame what I don’t like. Its body position is not as elegant as I expected.
Piotr…thanks man…I appreciate your comment. The image is soft at the doves because I prefocused at the building. About the USM I did it, but I didn’t want to push it too much.
Linda, Arya, Pat, thanks for your support. One of the things that I liked the most about this image Pat was the composition. Somehow the picture starts at the bottom and takes you on a curvy journey of different stages making it quite dynamic, but to me the magic comes from that backlit dove below the balcony.
Thanks again.
PSerna
www.pserna.com #1009680
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