Veiled Details

© Jane Paradis

Veiled Details

Uploaded: April 30, 2008


Veil, shoes and rings - for upcoming wedding. Edited levels, cropped and added layers in PSE 6.

For catch-all :)

Exif: F Number: 2.2, Exposure Bias Value: 0.00, ExposureTime: 1/15 seconds, Flash: did not fire, compulsory flash mode, ISO: 400, White balance: Auto white balance, FocalLength: 50.00 mm, Model: PENTAX K100D


Mick Burkey May 02, 2008

From the CC ... I really like the concept here and the tilt / crop view, but can't find the focus. If that's your intention, well, okay, but doesn't really do it for me. Also, the overall color cast makes it hard to stay interested, IMO. #913369

Jane Paradis May 02, 2008

Hi Mick: I appreciate the comments - I liked the composition, but you're right about the lack of focus. I just couldn't quite get a tight crop AND focus on the rings. I have a few others that I'll post for comments to see if they come across any better. #5873826

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