Lip Smackin Good

© Jennifer H. White

Lip Smackin Good

Uploaded: January 10, 2008

Description

Exif: F Number: 2.2, Exposure Bias Value: 0.00, ExposureTime: 1/10 seconds, Flash: reserved, White balance: Auto white balance, FocalLength: 11.19 mm, Model: Canon PowerShot G6

Comments

Jennifer H. White January 10, 2008

Any suggestions, comments, critiques? #826591

paola A. Jofre January 10, 2008

Hi Jennifer :) I like the vivid colors in your image and the subject. Perspective is really good.
If this were my shot I would try for a complete Dof, I find the blur distracting. Maybe if you just blur the background and leave the foreground focused. I hope you do not mind :) #5321459

Stan Lubach January 10, 2008

Jennifer, I agree with Paola. By focusing on the second one, attention is drawn to that one over the other's. If that's not the intention, my suggestion would be to focus on the first and increase the depth-of-field so that only the very back is blurred. I do like the color, though. #5321726

Jennifer H. White January 11, 2008

I did intend to have only one in focus, but maybe I should have focused on the first one and let it fade back.

Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it. That's exactly what I need. #5323633


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