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Uploaded: July 12, 2007

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Exif: F Number: 5.3, Exposure Bias Value: +0, Exposure Time: 10/6400, Flash: flash did not fire, Focal Length: 250mm, Camera Model: NIKON D50

Comments

paola A. Jofre July 12, 2007

would really like to get some help on this one :) please :)

Should I make the bodies brighter?
I also blurred them a bit, should I loose that and make it sharper, I was going for a dreamy effect. #689859

Cyn Valentine July 12, 2007

THis is so adorable! I would lighten with the dodge tool.. Especially the neck and ears of the boy..you have a beautiful gallery! Great work! #4502302

paola A. Jofre July 16, 2007

Hi Cyn :) thank you for your kind words and help :)
Here is my second attempt #4514090

David Pratt July 18, 2007

I love the blur effect, I might even try lightening a bit more around the shoulders head area. #4523095

paola A. Jofre July 21, 2007

Hi David, thank you for the feed back :)
Here is another try at it, just a bit :) #4534639

Tina Shaw July 30, 2007

I think you're making great progress on this! Its an adorable shot & love the treatment applied to it! #4580202

paola A. Jofre August 02, 2007

Thank you Tina :) i'm still working on it. The ears are not so easy :) #4593892

September 26, 2007

Very sweet -- love the effects. Oh, please do invite anyone you'd like to join artsy-fartsy club. The more the merrier, I say. #4848982

Mike F. Anderson June 23, 2008

Paola - I like all three versions and may like the first one best because I like it when things are left out and you have to use your imagination! #6098116

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