Anna
Uploaded: June 12, 2006
Wojtek Dziedzic June 12, 2006
Comments and Critiqe welcome :) #463542Kay Beausoleil June 13, 2006
A very pleasing and peaceful portrait, Wojtek!If it were mine, though, I'd tone down the highlight on her shoulder because it's a bit distracting. #2890056
Wojtek Dziedzic June 13, 2006
Thanks for response Kay. I think that your'e right, the shoulder (and probably the forehead are too bright. Best regards! #2890347Carolyn Foster Spano June 13, 2006
Wojtek, I think her face is lovely. However, I will agree that the shoulder overpowers her face. Were it mine, I might crop it so that the shoulder doesn't take up so much space in the image. If it wasn't taken this way in camera, and you can go back and recrop it, I think you might come up with a crop that focuses less on the shoulder and more on the face, even an odd angle would work. (I still like that it isn't full face. Don't change that!This is just one woman's humble opinion. #2891347
Wojtek Dziedzic July 03, 2006
Carolyn, your suggestions will be considered. Thanks for your time and I'm waiting for your opinion about other my photos :)Wojtek #2982483
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