Hawk
Uploaded: May 03, 2006
Lens: Sirrus 60-300mm
Focal Length: 300mm
ISO: 200
Aperture: F7.1
Shutter: 1/1000
Location: Benalmadena, Spain
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Andrew JM Davies May 03, 2006
Your comments please..... #439028Andrew JM Davies May 05, 2006
Any comments????? #2729540Ariel Lepor May 05, 2006
Hey, don't get fussy! People aren't computers, LOL! Yeah, I have a comment. This is a very nice picture. How did you get so close in on the Hawk? Nice job. Now for the critique. The quality of this picture isn't amazing. There is some noise in the sky and I would expect to see more details on the Hawk. Don't sharpen the image SO much before uploading. Also, next time you take a picture like this, I suggest you open up the aperture more (maybe this would help bring depth to the Hawk itself), which would allow for a lower ISO (lower noise). Also the orientation of the Hawk isn't so great... another view (like if you could see more of it's belly) would be better. But you have a good camera and a good eye! Try again and let's compare the two! If you follow my advice, I bet the next picture will be a prize winner! #2729787Sign up for an interactive online photography course to get critiques on your photos.
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