Colleen Grad 1

© Michael Kelly

Colleen Grad 1

Uploaded: October 20, 2013

Description

My wife's sister's daughter for her college grad on Dec 7th. All Taken on Saturday 10/19/13 on the UNR campus.

Exif: F Number: 2.8, Exposure Bias Value: 0.00, ExposureTime: 1/500 seconds, Flash: did not fire, compulsory flash mode, ISO: 800, White balance: Auto white balance, FocalLength: 180.00 mm, Model: Canon EOS 5D Mark II

Comments

Michael Kelly level-classic October 20, 2013

Here a a few more - feel free to critique but they are all in her possesion. I am just posting for the club and the photo walk yesterday. #1549369

Michael Kelly level-classic October 20, 2013

Sorry missed #10877346

Elaine Hessler October 20, 2013

Ok I am jealous. These are amazing. Please share your specs and if you used a flash and how, ect. I love the first three-she should be happy with all of them!

I tried this with Erin Friday (leaves still mostly green here) and my pics do not look amazing. I need to work on them PP and I'll post later...

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Michael Kelly level-classic October 20, 2013

Thank you Elain - She seems pretty happy with them and selected 8 shots out of the about 30 different shots we took.

In all of the shots she is in full shade - taken between 3:30 and 5:30 yesterday afternoon. All were shot with 70 to 200 mm f2.8 stabalized lens with most wide open at f2.8. All are at ISO 800. The one with the red vine is at f11 because she wanted it to show clearly. I took my flash with me as I thought we might have to do some fill work but finding good shade negated the necessity. #10877557

Jeff E Jensen October 20, 2013

Excellent work on all of these, Mike! #10877584

Dale Hardin October 20, 2013

Beautiful girl and wonderful portraits, Mike. Love the separation you get with that 70/200 lens. On my wish list but still short of $$$$. #10877605

Rita K. Connell level-classic October 21, 2013

Mike theses are great shots. the only critique I would give these is one with the beautiful color leaves. its the angle of her body. they say that taking straight on with shoulder straight across is the most unflattering the shoulder should always have a slight angle to them. a good example of it is just looking at the angle of the body from 1 to 2 really a great job this isn't something we see out of you. #10877763

Peter W. Marks October 21, 2013

I'm hoping it is just my memory but I don't remember too many beautiful young lades like this at my school.
Oh yeh, the leaves are nice too!

Can you tell our Rita has been taking portraiture classes? But she is right about straight-on shoulder shots; not that a pretty smile like Colleens can be diminished. #10878059

Susan Williams October 21, 2013

These are all great. As to the shoulders, sometimes breaking the rules is okay, and she has a nice posture and beautiful shoulders. I really like #4 because her eyes are captivating with the color of the water. But, man, those Fall Colors are an awesome background. Very cool to have an Uncle do the portraits. Nice work, Mike. #10878306

Michael Kelly level-classic October 21, 2013

Thank you all for the nice comments and thanks for the tip on the shoulders. This was one of the last shots and I was draging a bit haveing walked the whole campus so I did not take much time to pose her. I actually thought this shot would be to busy to work, but I think the color difference makes for an OK speration.

Yes Peter she is indeed a lovely young lady, and I don't remember to many during my school days that looked as nice, but it is probably my memory rather than reality.

I am glad to do it for her Susan - it was actully fun for me. I have not walked the whole campus in many years. It has sure changed since my father started teaching there in 1955 and even a lot since I last taught there in 2002. #10878309

Beth Spencer October 22, 2013

Mike these are all amazing!! She is a beautiful lady and she is lucky you could do her pictures. #10878730

Elaine Hessler October 22, 2013

Hmm-I did not know that about the shoulders-I'll have to try that sometime. So turning them a bit sideways is what you mean?

So one more question-I am struggling with DOF-too much and not enough.

With the first shot, you used f 2.8, but all of her is in focus. Were you standing a bit back? What was the focal length? Just asking because I am having a tough time with this!!! #10878739

Michael Kelly level-classic October 22, 2013

Thank you so much Beth.


Elaine a rule of thumb is that the longer the focal length, the closer the subject, and the wider the f stop the less DOF.

Taking the first shot as an example this is F2.8 at 180mm so I was a ways back. Even with that you can see the very back of the tree starting to drop out of the sharp focus area. I shoot portraits with the 70 - 200 f2.8 most of the time so that I can stay back from the subject so they feel a little more natural than when a camera is in their face. I also tend to shoot this lens at the f2.8 setting in order to isolate the subject from the BG. Normally I shoot from 85 to 135 mm which is a flattering focal length for most faces as it flattens the features slightly due to the telephoto effect. There are all kinds of discussion on this but that is my standard. I got a little long on this one for some reason at 180mm. Just too lazy to move I guess. One thing you can always do is set up your shot and the do a DOF preview.

I am so used to shooting people shots I don’t even think about camera setting most of the time because they come naturally to me. I was a company photographer for Nevada Bell telephone company for almost 2 years an during that time I only shot people 8 hours a day 5 days a week unless I was in the darkroom. Most of that work was done with either a 35mm with a 135mm lens or a twin lens reflex with a 105mm. That is why I seldom shoot people now because I was so burned out on people as a subject.
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Elaine Hessler October 23, 2013

Thanks so much-I am going to enter your info into my little electronic photography encyclopedia:)

I didn't realize you took photos of people for 2 years-that would burn me out too. What was done with these photos, since it seems like you took so many of them? Sounds like a huge company. #10879458

Michael Kelly level-classic October 23, 2013

A lot of water under the bridge since then which was 1971 - 73. The company has changed hands a number of times with the breakup of the Bell system and putting it partially back together again. Most of the Photos were used in the in house magazine published monthly or published in various state newspapers. They belonged to the company so I don't have any. The total employee base was about 4000 at that time. I don't even know if any of the photos still exist.

I went from the Co. Photographer to marketing, then a stint running the computer center, then accounting, then to AT&T in 1984, and back to Nevada Bell in 1987 running applications programming, then to systems programming and in charge of the mainframe center. Eventually as the company changed I ended up with all internal communications and systems from telephone to desktop support and all aspects of computer hardware and software support and programming. Finally they added operator services - operator assistance (basically your long distance operators and directory assistance (411 calls) to my existing duties. I retired with 30 years service in 2001.
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