Jeff at Santa Monica
Uploaded: October 07, 2013
Shutter Speed: 1/160.00 F-stop: f/16.0
Focal Length: 14.50
Exif: F Number: 16, Exposure Bias Value: 0.30, ExposureTime: 1/160 seconds, Flash: did not fire, compulsory flash mode, ISO: 200, White balance: Auto white balance, FocalLength: 14.50 mm, Model: DSC-R1
Jeff E Jensen October 08, 2013
I'd say a square crop, starting in the left, top corner, should fix everything that is wrong with this image. . . .It was good to shoot with you again, my friend! #1547608
Dale Hardin October 08, 2013
Nice try. I truly enjoyed myself. Thanks for letting me know you were in the area. How do you like that I got the guy with both feet off the ground? #10866070Debbie E. Payne October 08, 2013
No, Jeff. You need to stay in the picture and keep the proportions as is to keep that great perspective line in the shot. Good "foot work", Dale. I am not sure I could have done that getting both of his feet off the ground. #10866149Dale Hardin October 08, 2013
Thank you Debbie. Jeff and I decided at this point that since it was starting to warm up, it was best that we conserve our energy. #10866175Beth Spencer October 08, 2013
Jeff looks a little puzzled or lost not sure which? Maybe he is thinking about jogging? #10866215Susan Williams October 08, 2013
I'm with Debbie in keeping Jeff in the frame. (A penny for your thoughts, Jeff.) Both feet off the ground is some fancy footwork on your part, Dale (like the pun?) There's a lot to love about this image. #10866232Dale Hardin October 08, 2013
Believe me Beth, we were definitely NOT thinking about jogging. :o)Thanks Susan. Of course Jeff was joking about the crop. It was designed to cut him from the image. Hmmm Maybe he has something there. :o) #10866266
Susan Williams October 08, 2013
You could flip it and then crop. #10866283Susan Williams October 08, 2013
I should have added, "just kidding." I was playing along. #10866310Dale Hardin October 08, 2013
This is how I usually film Jeff. Always lying down on the job. #10866323Elaine Hessler October 09, 2013
Funny! I love the first one! I love the diagonal of the palm trees, the levitating runner, and Jeff sitting there looking hot and tired in the sun. That sun sure looks bright! I also like how you put the sun behind a palm tree-the lighting on Jeff's face is really nice.I like it as it is:) #10867049
Dale Hardin October 09, 2013
Thanks Elaine. #10867144Stephen Shoff October 09, 2013
Good catch, Dale. The side lighting is great. #10867197Dale Hardin October 09, 2013
Thanks Stephen. Managed to get a few from this view as we took a break. #10867211Michael Kelly October 10, 2013
I really like the POV and lighting on this shot. Makes this the iconic scene for Southern California. I would not change a thing despite Jeff’s suggestion. #10867661Dale Hardin October 10, 2013
Thanks Mike. #10867678Sign up for an interactive online photography course to get critiques on your photos.
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