Breaking Sunrise [Contest Pre Finalists September 2013]
Uploaded: September 21, 2013 19:28:00
Exif: F Number: 11, ExposureTime: 1/20 seconds, ISO: 100, FocalLength: 32.00 mm, Model: Canon EOS 5D Mark III
Dale Hardin September 22, 2013
John, here is the result I had envisioned with a bit more warmth and brighter foreground.Not necessarily better, just different. #1545524
Dale Hardin September 22, 2013
After reviewing these together I think I added too much warmth, but feel a little would help. I do like the additional highlights though. #10851298Memoriee G. Sconce September 22, 2013
I do like the brighter foreground. Dale don't know if you added too much if so just a little. #10851359John Singleton September 22, 2013
Thanks Dale, I have a version similar to this. I am unsure which I like better.Dale Hardin September 22, 2013
No matter how you treat it, John, it is an enviable image with glorious light. Thanks for sharing it and the willingness to play around with the results. #10851416John Singleton September 22, 2013
I appreciate the critique. I did use your initial info to improve on the photo. Beyond that it becomes personal preferences. Thanks for your assistance. Will let you know how it prints. Planning on printing it tomorrow evening on my inkjet. #10851449Amanda D. Austwick November 04, 2013
Beautiful sunrise image John; congratulations on your Finalist! #10890683Dale Hardin November 04, 2013
A big Congratulations John. #10890808John Singleton November 04, 2013
Thanks Amanda and Dale. Again thanks Dale for your input. This printed out beautifully with my Epson.Merna L. Nobile November 16, 2013
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