homework night 1

© lisa anderson

homework night 1

Uploaded: November 28, 2012

Description

Exif: F Number: 8, Exposure Bias Value: -1.00, ExposureTime: 8/1 seconds, Flash: did not fire, compulsory flash mode, ISO: 200, White balance: Auto white balance, FocalLength: 20.00 mm, Model: Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XSi

Comments

Dale Hardin December 04, 2012

This is really a nice reflection shot Lisa and you did so many things right. It's center weighted, perfect for a strong reflection. And it's level, very hard to do sometimes in that light, and it's sharp and well composed. I like it.

I would suggest, however, that you tone down the brightness of the bridge lights, also a bit on the tower, both top and reflection, and on the sign at the top of the left tower, and it's reflection. Small issues, for sure, but would help the overall look I believe. #1501902

Stephen Shoff December 04, 2012

I agree with Dale. The bright highlights are the only suggestion I would have made. The color combinations are pleasing. I like the strong, black foreground. #10451092

Elaine Hessler December 04, 2012

Wow this is a good one. I agree 100% with dale, just those area look a bit overexposed. The colors, reflection, and buildings are great. Nice job! #10451158

Jeff E Jensen December 04, 2012

Yup, Dale is right, all it needs is an adjustment to the highlights. #10451234

Michael Kelly level-deluxe December 04, 2012

Beautiful night scene with great reflections. I agree just a reduction of highlights and this is good to go #10451403

Rita K. Connell level-classic December 05, 2012

I love the reflections and how smooth the water is. I clarity is very nice indeed. agree about toning the highlights down a tad. this is a winter for sure! #10452202

Debbie E. Payne December 05, 2012

This is a very interesting image, Lisa. Love the intensity of the colors but would have to agree that you could tone down the lights just a tad. Like Rita said, "a winner for sure!" #10452758

Peter W. Marks December 06, 2012

I have nothibg to add Lisa. Thanks for showing us some more of a place we probably will never visit. #10453068

Beth Spencer December 06, 2012

I really like the colors and reflections in this one. I look forward to seeing the edits you decide to do. #10454071

Anthony L. Mancuso December 07, 2012

I agree with the group...can't wait to see the next version! #10454484

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