Building Abstracts

© Michelle Campbell

Building Abstracts

Uploaded: January 10, 2002


Playing with different views. Thoughts on improvement?


Donna R. Moratelli January 10, 2002

hi Michelle,I have one crop suggestion. It is very nice but a little bit too tightly cropped. Try it again and include a little more on the sides and the cross on top. The size of the jpg does not look right. It is too long. Other than these two points, I would say that the photo is very well done. #2885

Michelle Campbell January 10, 2002

You are absolutely right! This was my fault in the way I cropped it on my scanner! (And then some!) I'm gonna try it again and try to do it better. I'd appreicate your thoughts.
Thank you.
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Donna R. Moratelli January 11, 2002

I am looking foward to seeing the next version Michelle. #4608

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