Decay

Uploaded: January 08, 2002

Description

Minolta X-700, Tri-X

Comments

Charlie F. Kohn January 08, 2002

a very interesting and straightforward graphic style view. lighting from the left helps to define the front and is instrument to bring about the structure. if I may add one advice for next time: move a little further off to the right. maybe even as far as giving the stairs a base and allow one of the windows to show in full. you remember: normally your create more interest by moving the centre of interest some way off centre.
go on seeing like this! good light.

charlie.f.kohn@sixpence-pictures.com
munich/germany #2851

Phil Penne January 08, 2002

Thanks for the kind words and, yes, you're absolutely right - I'm not sure what posessed me to center it, rather than shift everything to the left. I would have definitely improved the image! #4560

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