Watermelon

© Audrea Telkamp

Watermelon

Uploaded: September 30, 2004

Description

My youngest, Elijah. Taken after my eldest son's "Watermelon Run" cross country meet. 20mm, f/5.6, 1/500 sec, iso 100. Light source to the right is late day sunshine. Replaced the parking lot behind him with a grassy area from another shot in PSE2.

Comments

Cathy Barrows September 30, 2004

too cute....this just says summer #174150

Cathy Gregor September 30, 2004

Super image, Audrea! He's getting every single bite of that melon.
-cathy #814055

Susan T. Evans level-classic September 30, 2004

Wow someone really loves watermellon, terrific Audrea! #814267

Christopher W. Holmes September 30, 2004

Wonderful picture. I'm curious, what was the light source to the right of the camera? #814918

Audrea Telkamp October 01, 2004

Thank you so much for your comments!! Christopher, the light source to the right is the sun later in the day (I think around 5:00pm). I replaced the parking lot that was behind him with some of the grassy area from another shot. #816199

Dale Gast October 03, 2004

HOW CUTE, Audrea!!! Love the intensity on his face trying to get every bit of watermelon!!! Great job!!! #819421

Louison Rousseau October 13, 2004

You did a great job with the close-up, the light (which wasn't that easy to expose for, I think) and the replacement of the background. This is a sweet and lovely shot!

If I may add a simple suggestion, I would try and blur the grass before adding it to the photo (not after, as you might get a funny halo on your son). It appears a bit too sharp considering that even a small aperture would probably not get something as close as your son's face and something else in the bg both in such good focus. This would also help the bg not overpower the shot. #839179

Audrea Telkamp October 13, 2004

Thank you so much Louison!! That will give me the depth I am missing. Something bothered me about the background - you put your finger right on it! #839356

Dale Gast October 15, 2004

CONGRATULATIONS, Audrea!!!!!!!! #843551

Stanley J. Contrades October 15, 2004

Good job, Audrea, and CONGRATULATIONS!!
Aloha,
Stan #843926

Doug Wean October 15, 2004

Congrats Audrea! A wonderful Image!

Doug #844348

Leonard Pierce October 15, 2004

Congratulations Audrea! #844388

Audrea Telkamp October 15, 2004

Thank you so much Dale, Stan, Doug, and Len!! #844893

Nancy Grace Chen October 15, 2004

Precious... it will be a great keepsake!! I love those long, long eyelashes. Congrats on your finalist.

Nancy #846021

Lucia De Giovanni October 16, 2004

Congratulations Audrea, this is so cute! #847905

Audrea Telkamp October 16, 2004

Thank you Nancy and Lucia! #847948

Louison Rousseau October 16, 2004

Congratulations, Audrea! #848225

Jonna Bergström October 16, 2004

Congratulations Audrea! Great image! #848530

Audrea Telkamp October 16, 2004

Thank you very much Louison and Jonna! #849363

Colette M. Metcalf October 17, 2004

Congrats Audrea!!! #850433

Ellen Peach level-classic October 17, 2004

Way to go, Audrea...congrats on this and all your finalists!!! #850688

Karen Engelbreth October 17, 2004

Wonderful shot - Congratulations! #851224

Audrea Telkamp October 17, 2004

Thank you Colette, Ellen, and Karen!! #851769

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