unnamed peak B&W edit

© Howard Eisenberg

unnamed peak B&W edit

Uploaded: July 24, 2012

Description

ISO 100, 130mm focal length, 1/400s, f/11.0. Edited in Silver Efex 2. Trial and Error... feedback appreciated on the edit.

Exif: F Number: 11, Exposure Bias Value: -1.00, ExposureTime: 1/400 seconds, Flash: did not fire, compulsory flash mode, ISO: 100, White balance: Auto white balance, FocalLength: 130.00 mm, Model: Canon EOS 7D

Comments

Arthur Bohlmann July 24, 2012

It's much better than your previous attempt Howard. I like how you pulled out more structure in the clouds. I might suggest that you use control points in Silver Efex to lightenen the dark rocks in the foreground and add a little texture as well. #1476709

David Resnikoff level-classic July 25, 2012

Howard

I like both images

David R #10243437

Wendy M. Hansen-Penman July 25, 2012

I really like the drama and mood of this image. I too would like to see more detail in the rocks. #10244199

Howard Eisenberg July 26, 2012

Thank you Art, David, and Wendy. Expect one more edit attempt to pull some detail from the rocks. I appreciate the honest feedback! #10244700

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