Trouble

Uploaded: August 30, 2005

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Keri M. Dietrich August 30, 2005

I think this is a nice photo, but not a great one, any ideas how to improve it? #303045

Kirsi Bertolini August 30, 2005

Okay, you asked! I love that rain (or a shower?) next to her and desat and neongreen is well done. I'd try to lighten her face and hair to get more details out, Hard to tell how not knowing which program you use. You could also clone out those brighter objects behind her. Finally I'd try to blur the grass around her, but that is a fine lineplay with nicelooking rainy effect you have.. #1786910

Keri M. Dietrich August 30, 2005

I rally appreciate your feedback. I use photoshop elements 3.0 and I'm not great at it by any means. I'll try to figure out how to clone out those objects and work on the grass blur and see what I come up with. Thanks again! #1786958

Keri M. Dietrich August 31, 2005

I guess if I knew how to spell it "really" would be nice. ;-) #1790768

Katrina McMeans September 09, 2005

I agree with Kirsi about cloning aout the background objects, but I personally think that other than that, this is pretty good!
I LOVE the water spraying in front of her...really adds the right touch!
~K #1819680

Keri M. Dietrich September 09, 2005

Thank you, any advice on how to clone out objects in PS? #1819693

Katrina McMeans September 09, 2005

I don't use PS myself...so I wouldn't be able to offer advice on it. What I use (simple, I know!) is Microsoft Photo Editor. If I need to get rid of an object, I usually 'blur' it away, but in this case, that would ruin the lovely sprinkling water.
Sorry! I guess I'm not much help! ; (
You could probably find out by submitting the question in the Q&A.
~K #1819784

Keri M. Dietrich September 09, 2005

Thanks, I'll do it. #1819802

Janet Friedman September 09, 2005

I love b/w pictures with hand coloring to a particular part of the photo. Very pretty work!

JP #1819892


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