Station 6

© Nikki McDonald

Station 6

Uploaded: July 16, 2008

Description

Finalist
Union Station, Omaha, Nebraska
Except for keeping the black and white conversion, I redid just about everything on this one--from the crop to working on the tones to applying a bit of find edges.
Submitted originally in the fall of 2007, I have also tried this revised version in Elements of Design in March, the May Cash Contest, and now in Travel and Place in July.

Exif: F Number: 2.8, Exposure Bias Value: 0.00, ExposureTime: 6250/1000000 seconds, Flash: did not fire, auto mode, ISO: 125,125, White balance: Auto white balance, FocalLength: 9.40 mm, Model: KODAK P712 ZOOM DIGITAL CAMERA

Comments

Nikki McDonald level-classic July 16, 2008

Thanks for all the wonderful encouragement, everyone.

Lisa J. Boulden
Fabulous pov and perspective, Nikki!
Well done!
~?~Lisa
3/30/2008 6:25:00 AM

Wanda Judd
It really is done well..I'm drawn into the scene...it's hard to say if Elements or Travel would be better...it does bring to mind and eye travel...
3/30/2008 6:43:38 AM

Ken Smith
That looks like a train that's still running today. Excellent work, Nikki. I think either category would work...
3/30/2008 6:45:21 AM

Laurie Daily
Your crop is perfect, Nikki...great leading lines and tones. I would say try one category and if that doesn't seem to do the trick...try again! Sometimes I have just changed the category the next month and that was all it took to get noticed.
3/30/2008 6:56:08 AM

Justin Baer
love the image. love it in B and w. wonderful capture!
3/30/2008 7:09:10 AM

MELODIE C. ROBERTS
I Love this NiK
Love the Black and White
Great persective
I feel as If I am Running along side Trying to Catch My Train
Fabulous!!!
3/30/2008 7:36:53 AM

JEANA CLARK
Of course MeL beat me here!! I'm not surprised!!
FANTASTIC SHOT NIK!!!
Excellent B&W composition!!
Superb revision!!!
I LOVE IT!!!

~J~
3/30/2008 7:59:21 AM

Peter Appelbaum
Great lines and depth of field. Nice B&W tones. Peter
3/30/2008 8:06:00 AM

David Phalen
Excellent POV, Clarity, tones and contrast!! Good luck!!
3/30/2008 8:48:45 AM

Steven W. Lepak
Bravo Nikki! Terrific perspective and composition! Love the b&w here. Keep up the great work. Best Regards, Steven
3/30/2008 9:27:17 AM

Alison M. Cox
Great comp, pov and lines, Nikki!
3/30/2008 10:05:27 AM

Tamara K. Walker
Fantastic work.
3/30/2008 10:12:42 AM

MELODIE C. ROBERTS
Had ~J~ Not Hopped on The Ethanol Railcar instead she might have been able to beat Me Here
3/30/2008 10:19:38 AM

Carolyn Fletcher
A big wow from me, too! Super shot!!
3/30/2008 1:08:33 PM

Kitty R. Rodehorst-Hanna
SUPER re-work, Nikki!!!!! All of your adjustments are perfect!!!!!! ? k
3/30/2008 2:09:46 PM

Sandra R. Alvey
Fantastic re-sub Nikki, I love the crispness of this now! Awesome B&W tones and I love the POV! Great image and well seen hon!
3/30/2008 6:24:39 PM
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Nikki McDonald level-classic July 16, 2008

Stefania Barbier
spectacular pov and conversion Nikki!
3/30/2008 10:59:44 PM

William C. Raco
Excellent display of perspective and depth
Nicely done, Nikki
3/31/2008 3:05:04 AM

Mitch Spence
You know I've always like this, Nikki, and I love the changes you've made, giving more emphasis to the sign and to the important elements as they progress down this long platform. Crisp and clean, leading the eye just where it should.
3/31/2008 10:10:43 AM

Colleen Farrell
FANTASTIC! Definitely an EoD image. Love the b&w. Beautifully done, Nikki!
3/31/2008 5:35:26 PM

Colette M. Metcalf
Wow! GREAT capture, Nikki!!!
4/4/2008 4:18:33 AM

Rakesh Syal
Outstanding capture, composition and tones, Niki!
4/4/2008 1:51:59 PM

Stefania Barbier
great pov and tones Nikki!
4/5/2008 12:15:36 AM

Kara Hendricks
I really LOVE the b/w here Nikki... Wonderful square crop and clean lines too... A real impressive shot!!!
Good luck in the contest!!
4/7/2008 4:30:12 AM

Susan M. Campbell
I love a good B&W image. Wonderful contrasts and DOF Nikki. Nice work!
4/7/2008 12:05:37 PM

Leslie McLain
Great image. Perfect for B&W.
4/7/2008 6:23:08 PM

Eileen J. Bedford
AWESOME, love the tones and OH, that perspective and comp you have. SO WELL DONE...........
4/7/2008 6:50:03 PM

Corinne M. Thompson
You're doing fabulous with all your reworks Nikki, including this one! Would you like to do mine in your spare time? ;)
4/7/2008 11:41:00 PM

JEANA CLARK
YIPPPPEEEEEE NIKKIIIIIIIII!!!
Congrats on this very fine
and well deserved EP!!!
EXCELLENT!!!!!!
~ME~

4/8/2008 11:11:29 AM

MELODIE C. ROBERTS
I have been waiting for the train to pull in with this EP
Glad it finally Arrived!!!
WTG NiK
4/8/2008 4:21:32 PM

Vladan D. Djordjevic
Terrific photo with great tones, lines, pov, lighting. Amazing.
5/2/2008 7:15:44 PM

Ken Smith
Keep the faith on this one! :-)
6/30/2008 8:54:59 PM

Nikki McDonald
My first "BP Shoot" -- albeit a mini-one. Thanks.
6/30/2008 8:56:07 PM
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Dr Silly level-classic July 16, 2008

Even if this is a B&W (in a world full of color) I like it. Looks like the shades of B&W are spot on. :O)
#6187170

Donna La Mattino Pagakis July 16, 2008

Exellent design and tones Nikki. What a great image!!! Good luck!! #6187376

Dominick M. Dimacale level-addict July 16, 2008

Great image and wonderfully done in Monotone, Nikki.


Dominick #6187474

Melissa G. Meiselman July 16, 2008

WOW...this image has had a lot of exposure, Nikki!! I hope it gets some notice because the perspective, lighting and design elements are terrific!! #6187490

MELODIE C. ROBERTS July 16, 2008

Must Be an Oval Track ;0) #6187797

Tamara K. Walker level-classic July 16, 2008

Super light and tones. #6187958

July 16, 2008

Great b&w, fantastic tones and lighting! #6188006

Kitty R. Rodehorst-Hanna July 16, 2008

LOL @ Mel!!!!!

This was beautiful the first time and it just keeps getting better and better, Nikki!!!!! Good luck in this round!!!!! ♫ k #6188309

Susan M. Hembree July 16, 2008

Just a fantastic photo, Nikki! I love the perspective and the B/W tonal quality. Good luck on this wonderful re-submit! #6189461

July 17, 2008

WOW!!! Really love this one NIkki. Great composition, lighting and tones. #6190727

Mitch Spence level-classic July 17, 2008

A big favorite--one that I'm so pleased to see again. Keeping fingers crossed. #6191134

Daniella Puente July 17, 2008

Very good perspective on this BW, is an excellent photo!!! #6192291

Jeana Clark July 18, 2008


Still a fave Nik!!!

~J~ #6194539

David Phalen July 18, 2008

Excellent work Vikki!! Love the tone, contrast POV and clarity!! Good luck this time around!! #6195951

David Phalen July 18, 2008

OK, I can't type! (: Well done NIKKI!! #6195955

Susan M. Campbell July 18, 2008

I remember this. It's a terrific image. I love the lines and DOF. Good luck this time Nikki. #6196758

Dianna Hauf July 19, 2008

Well it is a first time seeing this for me Nikki and I am blown away! This is one of the BEST perspective and composition combined I have seen in a while! The conversion to b&w make this all the more eye appealing as it draws one into a scene from years back! GREAT clarity (DOF), tones and re-work Nikki! I think this is far deserving of a win! Already is a winner in my eyes! ☺ *d* #6199848

Colleen Farrell July 20, 2008

This is one of my favorites of yours, Nikki, and it looks sensational! I still think it could win in EoD. Do try it again in that category (or even CA) if it doesn't win this month. I didn't notice before the you can see "Pullman" on the railroad car on the left. Maybe your re-work brought that out. Outstanding!! #6201587

James Reininger July 22, 2008

Great composition... #6218742

Cesar J. La Rosa July 27, 2008

Absolutely BEAUTIFUL, Nikki!!! Love the perspective, the tones and the mood of this photograph. Awesome work!!!
Cesar #6236517

Stephanie Frey July 29, 2008

Terrific tones, lighting and POV! #6244568

Mitch Spence level-classic July 29, 2008

You gotta know I'm happy, happy to see the EP on this one, Nikki. :) #6245498

MELODIE C. ROBERTS July 30, 2008

FINALLY The Judges Jumped on Board!!!! #6250574

Kitty R. Rodehorst-Hanna July 31, 2008

And ANOTHER AWESOME EFP!!!!! WTG, Nikki!!!!! ♫ k #6255817

Sherry L. Davis August 21, 2008

Awesome entry, Nikki! Great perspective, tones! CONGRATS!! #6344327

Jean E. Hildebrant August 21, 2008

Wonderfully composed, Nikki! Congratulations again! My goodness, did you leave any finalists for anyone else, lol! WTG! #6344469

Judy V. Kennamer level-classic August 21, 2008

Congrats on this beautiful Finalist Nikkii! #6344920

A P August 21, 2008

Congrats on ALL your Finalist, Nikki #6344993

Jeana Clark August 21, 2008


I'm
SOOOOOOOO
HAPPPPPPPPPPYYYYYYY BOUT THIS ONE!
Way To Go NIK!!!!!!!!!!!!
CONGRATULATIONS HONEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~J~ #6345451

Tamara K. Walker level-classic August 21, 2008

CONGRATULATIONS! #6345546

Mitch Spence level-classic August 21, 2008

Oh goodie. Hot stuff. I'm happy!! #6345626

Susan Fox August 21, 2008

Finally got the recognition it deserves. Congrats Nikki!!!!!!!!!! #6345760

Kitty R. Rodehorst-Hanna August 21, 2008

YES!!!!! Congratulations on another finalist, Nikki!!!!! #6346015

Agnes Fegan level-deluxe August 21, 2008

I love this...congrats Nikki! #6346037

Stephanie Frey August 21, 2008

Congratulations on your wonderful Finalist, Nikki! #6346287

Susan M. Hembree August 21, 2008

I knew this one had potential! Congratulations on finalist #4, Nikki! All have been sooooooo well deserved! #6346711

Datha Y. Thompson August 21, 2008

WOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOO Nikki~~~ Big Congrats to you x's4!!! YGG :0) #6347495

Kristy A. Keene August 21, 2008

Congrats on your Finalist!!! #6347835

Katarina Mansson August 22, 2008

Love this picture and am therefore extra happy to say: Congratulations on another wonderful finalist Nikki! #6348854

MELODIE C. ROBERTS August 22, 2008

and The Train has pulled into the Station

Congratulations NiK!!
So Glad to see this!! #6348978

Anna Diederich August 22, 2008

Congratulations Nikki! #6349387

Susan M. Campbell August 22, 2008

Wow...another great finalist. Congrats Nikki. #6350188

Elida Gutierrez level-classic August 22, 2008

Congratulations on your Finalist.

#6350805

Sylvia Rossler August 22, 2008

Big congraz on this superb finalist Nikki :o) #6350910

Sylvia Rossler August 22, 2008

Big congraz on this superb finalist Nikki :o) #6350912

Mike Clime August 22, 2008

Congratulations on your finalist! #6351929

August 22, 2008

Congradulations on your finalist Nikki. #6352154

Laurie Daily level-deluxe August 22, 2008

Another congrats to you, Nikki!!!! #6352274

Kara L. Hendricks August 22, 2008

WOOHOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So glad you didn't give up on this beauty Nikki!!

Congrats.. you know it's a fav. of mine!! #6352751

Wendy Moghadam August 22, 2008

Congratulations on your finalist! Love the lines and the conversion to black and white is amazing. #6352968

Donna La Mattino Pagakis August 22, 2008

Outstanding pov and tones Nikki!! Congrats again! #6353054

Mary Beth Aiello level-classic August 22, 2008

Thanks for your persistance. Just wonderful, Nikki. A well deserved finalist. Good luck in the next round. #6353149

Ken Smith level-classic August 22, 2008

Persistence paid off! Congrats Nikki!! #6353451

frank w. degenhardt August 22, 2008

You made it to the finals! I’m so happy for you and wish you the best of luck in the next round. Fabulous work
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Colleen Farrell August 23, 2008

Oh, yippee, yippee! I'm so glad this made it! Big congratulations to you, Nikki! #6357002

Mike F. Anderson August 27, 2008

Excellent image Nikki! It pulls you into the composition and there are so many interesting details to study. Great PP and presenatation. Congratulations on your finalist #6375769

Kathy L. Clark August 27, 2008

Congrats Nikki on this really cool finalist. #6378684

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