Christmas Roses
Uploaded: December 29, 2003
I'm admittedly lousy at flower photos. I'd like your help in how to improve this image and tips for further photos.
Joy Brown December 29, 2003
This is a great shot, Bill! The black background really sets off the flowers and the composition is great. Don't be so hard on yourself!!! #83105Colette M. Metcalf December 29, 2003
And what is so lousy about this, Bill??? This is WONDERFUL!!! #310476Stephen Zacker December 29, 2003
Bill,I think you did a very nice job on this.
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Leanne M.E. Boyd December 29, 2003
Bill, I don't know what you are talking about. This is wonderful! #310490Evy Johansen December 29, 2003
This is a very beautiful image, Bill! #310497Charlene Bayerle December 29, 2003
Bill, this is beautiful!!! Beautiful color in the roses and I the black background really sets the color. #310609Claudia Kuhn December 29, 2003
Looks good to me Bill, too. Just try all angles out, try roses without the white baby's breath, experiment, and you'll find many other great pics with these roses! #310663Brenda W. LaFleur December 29, 2003
Bill, I find the image a bit too busy. I like Claudia's suggetion of shooting without the baby's breath. I like the dark background and your exposure is perfect! You've got good detail through the image too. Sometimes though a more shallow dof works in flower images where one flower is in focus and others are blurred. I usually try 'em both ways. Keep shooting those florals... you'll be a flower photographer before you know it! #310674RICKY RIDDLE December 29, 2003
Excellent Colors & Detail William Nice Shot. #310696Murry Grigsby December 29, 2003
This is a very pleasing image, Bill. The design, light and colors are fine. It is very difficult to shoot an OUTSTANDING flower image because so many people shot flower shots and there are tons of good shots. It usually takes an unusual perspective, a rare flower, stunning light or something that sets the image apart from all the others. These shots are rare indeed! So the best advise and several have already given it to you is to keep shooting and experimenting! #310760Carolyn M. Fletcher December 29, 2003
I can't help you there, I'm the worst at flowers! I like it, though. #310784Barbara Bergeron December 29, 2003
I have not be able to shoot flowers very well myself. This is done very nicely with the black background and detail. I think one or two roses a little closer would be better. The colors are pretty enough that the white baby's breath takes away from the vibrant roses. Nice job tho. Thanks for submitting because I have learned something too! #310789Gary O`Dell December 29, 2003
You have done an admirable job Bill... like with all subjects, we need to develop our own style and then practice, practice, practice... I always try to use the existing light to showcase the beauty and lines of my flower subject... again well done Bill #310820Shirley L. Carpenter December 29, 2003
Bill I think you did an excellent job on this!!!Im not to good at flowers myself.....But really love this image!!!!! #310898Ellen Peach December 29, 2003
Looks good to me, Bill...you know the only thing I would have done is moved in closer due to my macro addiction*~*! #310967Patricia A. Kuniega December 29, 2003
You captured the range of color on these roses wonderfully Bill! Since color and shape are the most interesting qualities, I would move in closer to capture even more than you did. See the way the petals curl and you get the color on color effect? Focus in. The baby's breath does make it feel like it's more of a flower arrangement. That back left rose isn't doing anything for your composition, so I'd have removed it physically. I'm like Ellen and like to fill the frame with as much flower as I can get... unless I'm primarily emphasing the shape or composition and the black background really hightlights that. The composition of three on the angle that you chose is a tough one for anyone to pull off, so as Brenda said, selectively focusing on one rose, with the others softer would be nice. I always pull the piece apart and shoot one, then two, and so on until I find different combinations that work. Nothing beats natural lighting near a window if you can get it.This concludes Lesson #1. Please turn the tape over and continue with Lesson #2. : ) #311055
William C. Raco December 29, 2003
Thank you all so much for the suggestions, tips and encouragement. I'll work on the ideas and show you my progress in the future. At least I hope it will be progress ;-DCarol Brill December 29, 2003
Wow, Bill, this is not only a lovely photo but a great education in the art of flower photography! Thank you! I like the diagonal line you took here in composing this image as well as the clarity of the shot... looking foward to more! #311210Susie Peek-Swint December 29, 2003
This is lovely Bill ~ you are too hard on yourself. I've enjoyed the photo discussion you've started. I agree lots of practice to find your own style. The beauty of digital is you can shoot from all angles and perspective then delete what you don't like. I look forward to seeing more of your work! #311331Susan T. Evans December 29, 2003
Bill, one thing I have learned in shooting flowers is to shoot from all perspectives, move your camera around, getting closer, move back a little, move around, turn the flower, and I do love all the suggestions above! A shallow dof, one flower in focus, the others blurred, and creative lighting.This is a really good start - however, I think it is too complicated. When doing flowers, I find what works best is to keep your compostion really simple, there is just too much flower here. One flower closeup with great lighting and filling the frame would be awesome. #311352
Karen M. Kroll December 30, 2003
I've had great success with shooting flowers by moving the display of flowers near an early morning window, casting a soft glow on the flowers and eliminating any other need for light. (Unless of course you want to add a touch of romance/drama by adding a diffused light from underneaty. Bring your subject in closer and choose either a wide angle lens, a macro lens, or out of the ordinary, a long lens. Keep your subject simple, keep the camera on a tripod, use ISO 100 and a long exposure. You will be very happy with your results.I'll take several pictures from all diferent angles and exposures. You can go through alot of pics, but you will find many that you will be happy with. And it is a good way to learn, too.
Good luck!
Karen #311635
Darren K. Fisher December 30, 2003
Hey Bill boy you have gotten some great ideas here, I can not waite to see what you come up with next. I have to say I like what you have here. The colors and dark bg are great. The one thing that I have learned myself is Natural light is the most complamenting thing for flowers. Keeping it simple really helps as well. Now what I am seeing here is the frame filled with the babies breath and a rose smack dab in the middle and of course your black bg showing through the baby breath, and did I did just tell you simple Oh well...LOL... #311745William C. Raco December 30, 2003
Thank you all, again, for the great lessons.bill #311749
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Lamont G. Weide December 30, 2003
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Karen Engelbreth December 30, 2003
Beautiful image, bill - love the colors and the composition! #312291Greg McCroskery December 31, 2003
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