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Superstar Evolution


 
  Superstar Evolution
Superstar Evolution
Inspiring from Human Evolution. A story about a man who want to be a superstar, but he must left his idealism behind...

Amril Nuryan

 
 
 

Amril Nuryan
 

Any critique is welcome,thank you


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October 03, 2007

 

Aggie Villanueva
  I think you've done a great story-telling job. The technique is very well executed, the message is clear and views beautifully. The only thing I'd change is I would love to see the group of images moved up and see more of the shadows they cast.


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October 03, 2007

 

Aggie Villanueva
  I think you've done a great story-telling job. The technique is very well executed, the message is clear and views beautifully. The only thing I'd change is I would love to see the group of images moved up and see more of the shadows they cast.


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October 03, 2007

 
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  You have done an excellent job with this Amril! Jeff


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October 03, 2007

 

Margie Hurwich
  Fantastic work, Amril. The story is in the man himself yet my eye keeps getting drawn to the shadows. Maybe a shift downward? In the end though, I love it!


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October 04, 2007

 

Nemil B. Chabebe
  Great concept, the photos are very well done and a great presentation as well.


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October 05, 2007

 

Heide Buescher Stevenson
  Your creativity is so inspiring. I love your out of the box concepts and look forward to seeing more of your work in the future. I am am in awe!


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October 23, 2007

 
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