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Karen N. Guertin

 
 
 

Hitoshi Odama
 

Karen,

It looks like you have a good eye to capture abstract in what you see. I like this photo because the details are very sharp and the colors, although subdued blend very well together with shapes and lines culminating into a very interesting abstract picture.

This is a picture without a defined subject - the shapes, lines and colors combine to form a composition. Excuse me for asking, but were those three shiny objects or lines intended to be a part of the composition? I’m trying to decide whether or not I like them in this composition …… what do you think?
Tosh


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December 17, 2006

 
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  Hi Tosh,

yes the three shiny lines where left in, but now that you mention it, I think they are somewhat distracting.
Karen


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December 24, 2006

 
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