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Jagadeesh Dev

member since: 11/30/2005
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Great shot! I think I'd like to see it cropped in more so her face fills the frame with some of the contrasting pinks of the wall on the edges!
5/5/2006 10:44:35 AM
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Laura Kubasiewicz

member since: 3/10/2006
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I quite like it with the background as it is, sort of mixing an abstract and a portrait, good capture!
5/6/2006 4:22:26 AM
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Protacio Serna

member since: 12/26/2004
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The beauty of this picture resides on the composition. Remember those lines many of us can see trough the viewfinder? They accurately match with the picture. Even the small light pink rectangle on the upper right corner fits perfectly. There are textures also to enjoy, and if there’s something I don’t like is only the direction of light. But that is something that cannot be easily modified when shooting candid on location of course, but sure could make a more expressive picture. Regards Pserna.com
5/6/2006 6:09:56 AM
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Gianluca Posella

member since: 10/15/2005
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I agree with Protacio's comment, you realized a good portrait, usually I imagine a portrait like this in B&W but here is nice the way the colours are mixed. Best regards. Gianluca
5/9/2006 10:16:52 AM
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Jagadeesh Dev

member since: 11/30/2005
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I wasn't "criticizing" per se, or saying that it would look better the way I suggested, I was just suggesting another way to present it! The photo as is is great, or I wouldn't have said it! Hope I didn't cause any offense!Sincerely, Andrew
5/9/2006 10:27:49 AM
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Dorann Weber
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member since: 2/13/2004
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Wonderful portrait Mario.. The woman's expression, and detailed facial lines tell a story.. The pick background compliments her..
5/9/2006 11:47:04 AM
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Nadya Johnson

member since: 11/19/2004
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This is WONDERFUL, Mario!!! In regards to what is said above, here is my opinion: first, the composition's great the way it is! Why? The TEXTURES are phenomenal! I would not cut the shot in any way. Secondly, you could have a nice photo if you cropped it, yes, but it would be a WHOLE DIFFERENT photograph! The colors (pink background, etc) are terrific! I do not see any problem with the light. True, the sun wasn't glowing on her face but again, that would be whole different photograph. As for the portrait itself and the lady -? OUTSTANDING!! We in the U.S. as a rule, and I do NOT mean, as individuals, tend to disregard old age as much as possible, always seeking for the Young, the Beautiful, and so on. I am not of that school!! It is not Life as it really exists. I am no "spring chicken" now myself, and I would hate to think, the only photographs me that "count" were taken in my 20's when I was what you call, a "looker!" This lady, whoever she is, is MARVELOUS, Mario! I'm so glad you caught her portrait! I will be looking forward very much to more of your work!
5/10/2006 4:24:28 PM
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Debbie Del Tejo

member since: 6/30/2005
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Excellent work Mario and may I welcome you as a BP member. I am sure we will see you around here a lot!!! Have fun and again WELCOME!!!!
5/10/2006 4:32:23 PM
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Perry j. Locke

member since: 1/14/2005
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Great portrait, I like textures and colors of the wall and burlap and the womans expression on the womans face. It all comes together well. I LIKE IT!!! Perry
5/12/2006 3:55:48 PM
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Mario A. Rocafuerte
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member since: 5/4/2006
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Thank you all for your nice comments!!! Laura, Protacio, Gianluca, Sipho, Dorann, Nadya, Debbie & Perry.
9/26/2006 5:28:31 PM
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Amalia Sylvia Arriaga Salinas
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member since: 11/1/2001
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Felicidades Mario! Es una fotografia estupenda!, Amalia
9/26/2006 9:01:16 PM
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Datha Y. Thompson
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member since: 5/17/2004
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CONGRATULATIONS MARIO!! :0)
9/26/2006 9:39:20 PM
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Carol Teal
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member since: 3/19/2006
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Congrats Mario! I really like this one and like the colors and texture too. Such a great portrait of this woman!
9/26/2006 10:07:33 PM
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Cesar J. La Rosa
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member since: 8/27/2004
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This is a WONDERFUL and very powerful portrait, Mario. The composition is excellent and the colors and textures are couldn't have been better. Congratulations on this very well-deserved Finalist!!!
9/26/2006 11:34:31 PM
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Mario A. Rocafuerte
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member since: 5/4/2006
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Amalia: Muchas gracias por tu amable comentario.
9/27/2006 10:48:57 AM
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Mario A. Rocafuerte
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member since: 5/4/2006
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I am so thankful to all of you who took the time to congratulate me on the finalist recognition.
9/27/2006 10:52:42 AM
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Janine Russell
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member since: 6/22/2005
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Mario, great portrait; congratulations on your Second Place win.
9/29/2006 12:31:24 AM
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Carol Teal
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member since: 3/19/2006
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Congrats on your 2nd place win Mario!
9/29/2006 4:50:05 AM
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Kay E. Mahoney
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member since: 4/23/2003
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Congratulations on your 2nd place winner.
9/29/2006 6:50:27 AM
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She-She Killough Contact She-She
She-She's Gallery
member since: 11/15/2005
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WONDERFUL Portrait Mario! Love it all! And so does the Judges!! Congratulations Mario!!
9/29/2006 8:43:46 AM
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Cesar J. La Rosa
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member since: 8/27/2004
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Congratulations on this WONDERFUL WINNER, Mario!!! I'm so happy to see that gold medal next to such a beautiful photograph!
9/29/2006 3:12:49 PM
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Mario A. Rocafuerte
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member since: 5/4/2006
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Janine, Carol, Kay, She_She and Cesar. Thank you everyone for all of your nice comments.
9/29/2006 6:20:21 PM
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Susana Heide
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member since: 7/30/2003
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Thought provoking portrait! Very well done! Congratulations Mario!!
9/29/2006 8:40:05 PM
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Allan L. Dy

member since: 10/17/2005
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Congratulations Mario! Well done! Very expressive image.
9/29/2006 11:00:06 PM
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Amalia Sylvia Arriaga Salinas
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member since: 11/1/2001
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Congratulations again Mario!, Well deserved!, Amalia
10/1/2006 5:03:45 PM
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JOHN V. ROSCICH
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member since: 4/6/2006
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CONGRATULATIONS MARIO WELL DESERVED!!! JOHN
10/1/2006 5:31:49 PM
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Protacio Serna

member since: 12/26/2004
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Felicidades Maestro Rocafuerte...saludos.
10/2/2006 7:00:57 AM
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Mario A. Rocafuerte
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member since: 5/4/2006
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Gracias por tus comentarios a esta foto y permiteme compartir este premio contigo, pues desde que fue publicada en BP tuviste una critica muy constructiva para ella. Gracias maestro Serna.
10/4/2006 5:53:49 PM
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Mario A. Rocafuerte
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member since: 5/4/2006
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Susana, Allan, Amalia & John: I truly appreciate each of your kind comments and encoruagement; thank you all very much.
10/4/2006 5:57:54 PM
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Gen Nagase

member since: 5/31/2003
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Fabulous!!! Many congrats on your win!!!
10/8/2006 3:10:15 PM
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Ahab Abdel-Aziz

member since: 3/25/2006
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great division of the page excellent colour and texture contrast wonderful subject great use of the negative spacelove it
10/9/2006 8:38:30 AM
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Ahab Abdel-Aziz

member since: 3/25/2006
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one nit i'd like to see the folded arms uncropped or taken out altogether
10/9/2006 8:39:50 AM
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Mario A. Rocafuerte
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member since: 5/4/2006
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Nobi, Ahab: Thank you for your kind comments.
10/9/2006 2:32:47 PM
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Doug J. Dailey

member since: 5/28/2007
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Mario, Excellent photo. Great! colors, textures, comp, and subject matter.Keep up the great! work. Best wishes, Doug
7/27/2007 1:39:01 PM
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Mario A. Rocafuerte
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member since: 5/4/2006
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Doug: Thank you for your kind comment.
7/27/2007 1:43:58 PM
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Debbie E. Payne
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member since: 3/21/2006
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This is AMAZING, for all the reasons above. Textures are super and the pink really brings in an element that you don't usually pair with an older person. It makes her radiant and lovely, regardless of her age. We all take aging too seriously and this image is truly a breath of fresh air.
5/25/2009 3:37:45 PM
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Mario A. Rocafuerte
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member since: 5/4/2006
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Debbie: Thank you, I am very pleased that you like this work.
5/29/2009 5:11:46 PM
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