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Electrical High
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Electrical High
Electrical High
This photo was taken for a possible ad for an electrical company. So, I would REALLY appreciate if you all would let the critisism rip on this shot! THANKS!! :o) By the way there were two computer changes that were done to the photo. 1. the boy was put higher in the frame. 2. Two of the electical lights were turned around in the photo.

Let me know of anything your eye might see as needing to be changed. Thanks Melissa
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Sandy Landon
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    Great action shot!!!! Good job!!

7/6/2005 11:08:59 PM

 
Tammy Scott
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WOW! Awesome cation capture, Melissa!

7/7/2005 12:38:15 AM

 
Donna K. Kilcher
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It is a great action shot

7/7/2005 3:19:13 AM

 
Bobbie Davis
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Ummmm.....I don't see a thing that needs to be changed on this image Melissa! It's tack sharp, great timing, and great colors. Maybe lighten it just a touch?

7/7/2005 3:39:50 AM

 
Melissa  L. Zavadil
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Thank you for your responces! I appreciate them all!

Bobbie, I see your point. I was very focused on making the lights the key feature that I might have darkened the image a bit too much. I will see what I can do. THANKS!! :o)

7/7/2005 6:02:52 AM

 
kerby lee pfrangle
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Melissa

Great action shot with wonderful lighting.

No critisism here.

Wonderful shot.

Kerby

7/7/2005 6:07:34 AM

 
Joy Rector
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Wow, what a great capture. Great job.

7/7/2005 6:38:57 AM

 
Deb Holmes
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Awesome action shot, Melissa, great comp, looks really cool!

7/7/2005 6:57:46 AM

 
KHAWLA Haddad
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Great action shot Melissa this is fantastic love it well don!

7/7/2005 12:42:38 PM

 
Goshka G.
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Looks great to me, Melissa!! Wonderful job!!

7/7/2005 12:48:49 PM

 
Alisha L. Ekstrom
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Oh WOW WOW WOW Melissa...This is a TERRIFIC action shot. Love the colors & everything about it...You go girl!!!:)

7/7/2005 12:59:20 PM

 
Ermanno Radice
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Wonderful action shot, great capture, Melissa!

7/7/2005 3:40:51 PM

 
Terry  R. Hatfield
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Excellent Editing Melissa!The People Are A Distraction In The Background I Would Clone Them Out,A Bit More Light On The Rider Since Its A Electric Company Ad Might Help Out, Its Very Creative Overall I Like It:-)

7/7/2005 7:08:09 PM

 
Olivia Navarro
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WOW, Melissa, fantastic shot!!! I, too, find the other people a bit distracting but I think they could be easily cloned out with the darkness of the trees behind them.

So how'd you get that gig? :-)

7/7/2005 7:23:42 PM

 
Linda D. Lester
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Awesome placement between the lights! I do think maybe a touch lighter on the bike and clone out people at the bottom! Awesome shot, I think they will be very happy with this.

7/8/2005 5:53:14 AM

 
Detrick V. Martin
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Great image, well done!

7/9/2005 3:59:22 AM

 
Tammy Scott
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Congratulations on another awesome finalist!

8/20/2005 2:44:48 PM

 
Anita Taylor
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This is fantastic, Melissa! Congrats on making finalist!

8/20/2005 3:45:03 PM

 
KHAWLA Haddad
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Congratulations on your finalist!

8/20/2005 3:57:43 PM

 
kerby lee pfrangle
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Melissa congratulations on your wonderful finalist. Best of luck in the next round.

Kerby

8/20/2005 6:34:39 PM

 
Ken Grooms
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I hope you get the nod from the client! You deserve it! Well done and congratulations!

8/20/2005 8:08:53 PM

 
Patricia Marroquin
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Awesome capture, Melissa! Well done, congrats!

8/21/2005 1:19:28 AM

 
Detrick V. Martin
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Congratulations!

8/21/2005 6:54:35 AM

 
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