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A Sunset of Pastels
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Debbie E. Payne
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member since: 3/21/2006
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I think I may need a rest from Eleanor's Caribbean restaurant for a while. Here is one of my favorite places to sit for pre, post and sunset itself. My question is - should the little red scrap in the foreground remain or go? I have a couple other images of this place and for some reason, although I know that it should go, I personally like it there because it points to not just something that catches the eye and should go, but it ties together man's presence on both land and sea.
1/31/2012 12:22:03 PM
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Sabrina L. Ryan
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member since: 3/23/2006
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Beautiful!
1/31/2012 1:38:27 PM
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Debbie E. Payne
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member since: 3/21/2006
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Thank you, Sabrina. I just visited your gallery and enjoyed myself thoroughly. It is only by visiting other people's galleries and seeing all the talent out there in BP-Land that we finally begin to understand what constitutes a good image.
1/31/2012 5:47:08 PM
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Stephen Shoff
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member since: 8/23/2008
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Well, I guess that since the first thing that caught my eye when I opened this picture was how out of place both the undefinable red object in the sand and the green moss were, I would have to vote for removing the red object.Looks like a wonderful location, you have some very nice variations, and you demonstrated good technique...you explored the location and found multiple opportunities. (this was a theme of the recent course I took so it is fresh on my mind).
1/31/2012 7:56:40 PM
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Jeff E Jensen
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member since: 6/8/2008
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Yup, I'd say remove it. This looks like a fantastic place for a sunset!
1/31/2012 8:43:07 PM
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Michael J. Kelly
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member since: 9/17/2005
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Debbie, these are just beautiful pastel colors. I like them all and like Stephen said a great exploration of the site.To your question: on my screen. I can't tell that this is something man-made. In many beach areas all kinds of material may be found. These things are primarily natural and may be bits of seaweed or portions of shell etc. In this shot, though I agree with the others that these colorful areas in the lower left portion of the picture constitute a major distraction and should go. I think it is primarily the intensity of the colors against the soft pastel of the rest of the shot that makes them such attention getters.
1/31/2012 8:57:17 PM
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Dale Hardin
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member since: 7/12/2006
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I tend to agree with the others Debbie. Love the way you used the rocks to lead the eye into the composition.
2/1/2012 12:12:09 AM
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Debbie E. Payne
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member since: 3/21/2006
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Here are my fixes for the two vertical ones. I did one for "A Sunset of Pastels" but it looks the same as the other two, really. Here they are.
2/1/2012 2:27:47 PM
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Debbie E. Payne
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member since: 3/21/2006
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Something goofy happened - why does that not surprise any of you! -- Another shot at only one of the verticals since they are very similar as well.
2/1/2012 2:31:29 PM
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Carol Eade
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member since: 5/2/2009
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Congratulations on your very beautiful finalist!
2/26/2012 5:05:42 PM
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Irene Colling
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member since: 1/11/2008
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Congratulations Debbie on your excellent Finalist photo.
2/26/2012 7:16:53 PM
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Lars Nitteberg

member since: 12/27/2004
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Love the detailed textures in the sand, rocks, sea and sky. A great capture with nice warm tones to it. Congrats
2/27/2012 1:48:43 AM
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Patrick Rouzes
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member since: 12/26/2006
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Congratulations & good luck on this incredible Finalist, Debbie! WTG!
2/27/2012 8:54:42 AM
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Dale Hardin
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member since: 7/12/2006
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congratulations Debbie. Wahoo.
2/27/2012 8:59:06 AM
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Merna L. Nobile
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member since: 12/31/2003
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CONGRATULATIONS! It’s great to know you have something new to smile about and a special reason to be proud. Merna
2/27/2012 9:31:21 AM
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Joan E. Hoffman
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member since: 11/18/2006
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WTG Debbie..... beautiful Finalist!
2/27/2012 12:42:14 PM
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Aimee c. Eisaman

member since: 11/13/2007
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Congrats Debbie as you know this was one of my favorites from your trip...beautiful! :~)
2/28/2012 7:30:45 AM
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Michael J. Kelly
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member since: 9/17/2005
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Glad to see one of these beauties made it to the finalist category. Congratulations! I just love the light and colors in these.
2/28/2012 12:51:31 PM
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Lori Carlson
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member since: 2/11/2005
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Beautiful scene, Debbie! Congrats to you! =)
2/29/2012 10:44:34 AM
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Debbie E. Payne
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member since: 3/21/2006
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Thank you all for your lovely comments. This was a pretty spectactular place for sunset photos. Maybe I'll keep trying with a few more I still have up my sleeve.
2/29/2012 3:25:21 PM
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