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Move in Close 3 Redo


 
  Move in Close 3 Redo
Move in Close 3 Redo
Redid photo because of cropped knee at left. Brought entire knee and figures into frame this time.

Karen N. Guertin

 
  Bring back nipped fingertip
Bring back nipped fingertip

Roxie Guilhamet

 
 
 
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Thanks for redoing it. I know it's a lot of work to try to reproduce a shot, and hard to match exactly.

I actually like the original better because in it you're closer in, there's no line in the tile, the second frog's eyes are more visible, and the lighting is better.

You really only needed an extra sliver at the bottom to keep the fingertip in the frame (I made a sample to show you), and a sliver on the left for the knee.

It's much easier to fix these small adjustments when you're shooting the first time, which is why it's good to check your LCD right after you take the shot so you can readjust and reshoot if needed.


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June 03, 2011

 
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